Wow, this tune certainly doesn't lack for creativity. The arrangement is interesting in that you have various parts coming in and out of the song, as well as different textures. Yet, some of the instrument choices seem to clash, for me. The bell is OK, but loud enough in the mix that I was reaching for my volume know to turn it down. The lead synth that follows doesn't quite fit, either, but that's merely my take on it. Other opinions may vary. Still, I think if you're interested in taking a second look at this, simply trying out some different instruments could take this a long ways.