I wasn't going to post this one, as it was written for a purpose (wedding anniversary) and has already served that purpose, so not really much point in making chnges now, but then I thought that it's been a while since I posted an original and also that it would still be useful to learn what I did wrong and what people thought worked, so fire away......all comments appreciated as always.

I will apologise up front for the vocal FX, so no getting on my case for that ! The song was for Mrs Paulo and she likes that sort of thing............yeah, I know, but she's pretty so she gets away with it, right ?


Making History

What an anniversary present.  I like everything about this song including the vocal f/x.  The mix was very robust on my  speakers, and I could understand the lyrics.  I like this style of music, and you do it very well.  Very well done.

paulo


I wasn't going to post this one, as it was written for a purpose (wedding anniversary) and has already served that purpose, so not really much point in making chnges now, but then I thought that it's been a while since I posted an original and also that it would still be useful to learn what I did wrong and what people thought worked, so fire away......all comments appreciated as always.

I will apologise up front for the vocal FX, so no getting on my case for that ! The song was for Mrs Paulo and she likes that sort of thing............yeah, I know, but she's pretty so she gets away with it, right ?


Making History

Brilliant! One present that can be recycled EVERY Year.

Good one Paulo, bet she loved this. ;-) I like the production, very creative stuff, and you crafted a great hook at the end...like the Pet Shop Boys with balls. ;-)

Outstanding production... I agree, everything works here including the vocal effect... but be careful with "automatic" pitch correction...
I heard a note around 1:28 and a few others that need adjusting... easy fix...
Very cool tune Paulo...

Love this piece. This had to be a challenge to produce/mix.  Really diggin that percussion beat. A very well written catchy song.  KUDOS! 


Kev

wow. a lot going on here, you flit from an indie song to dance to some kinda symphonic prog...amazing work. it's a manly effort and works really well, you can hear a lot of work in this one. great use of synths to give a big sound

Nice! I like.

Cool tune Paulo! Good mix of pop/dance...good mix too! I'm not crazy about the auto-tune sound of course, but I'll let it slide because I luv ya man...and it did work on this quite well. :) I'd still love to hear this without that. Scream at 3:44 was a nice touch...nice job brother. :)

-Danny

Hi Paulo,

it would still be useful to learn what I did wrong

ummm...I would say nothing.
Great job on every aspect of this from the song, the production and the vocal performance.


I'm sure Mrs. Paulo loved it.


As for the vocal effect...it's become so pervasive in current music if you and others hadn't mentioned it I probably wouldn't have even noticed it