Very Floyd like, I like it. The problem is there is too much reverb tale and it is smearing the whole track. I suggest shorting the reverb time and setting the hi and low pass on the verb you are using to 80hz and 4000hz respectivly. Also the ride cymabal is a little to high and when it comes in it over powers everything else.
But well done, I really like the synth sounds.
Peace Ben