korn3lius
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milk tea
I called this song " milk tea" because when I drink a cup of milk tea, have to relax and enjoy my time, the inspiration come itself, so I picked up my guitar and play it. take a listen to this relax song, I need your suggestion about everything, music, mixing, etc...thx
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pilfa
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i am stuck at work so cant say much for the mix as i can only listen on headphones..... But sounded good. Nice guitar work.
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mlockett
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Nice tune. Nice parts. The guitars sound a touch brittle... mic'ing the guitar instead of direct in thru the piezo would probably add a lot. To distinguish the parts better, you might roll of the highs a little on the background guitar(s). Also, you might drop the drum loop for a measure here or there, or try to change loops or even throw in an extra cymbal here and there to make it feel less like a loop. My two cents... Nice melody... Nice harmony...
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korn3lius
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Hi Pilfa and Mike, thanks for listening my song. really appreciate your suggestion
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danhazer
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Nice tune - relaxing and easy going. My #1 beef is that you're out of tune. That should never be allowed on a song like this one. My #2 beef is the tones - a mic'd guiar would sound much nicer. That's it. Nice idea. Thanks,
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korn3lius
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Hi Dan, thanks for listening, really appreciate it. u said that the song's out of tune, can u tell me more specific what's time is it? I use guitar internal pickup record the guitar sound, didn't like it very much since it lack of those acoustic sense.. thanks dude for your comment
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Sonic
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ORIGINAL: korn3lius Hi Dan, thanks for listening, really appreciate it. u said that the song's out of tune, can u tell me more specific what's time is it? I use guitar internal pickup record the guitar sound, didn't like it very much since it lack of those acoustic sense.. thanks dude for your comment I think he's talking about the lead guitar. You may have layed that part last, and not thought to re-tune before-hand. Drums are a bit buried, and a vocal would be nice. Be sure to re-post when the track is finished! It definatly has potential! Peace....
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korn3lius
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Hi Sonic, thanks for your time to listening, really appreciate your comment.. I'm considering to add some vocal..hm...let me see
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danhazer
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ORIGINAL: korn3lius Hi Dan, thanks for listening, really appreciate it. u said that the song's out of tune, can u tell me more specific what's time is it? I use guitar internal pickup record the guitar sound, didn't like it very much since it lack of those acoustic sense.. thanks dude for your comment I can't say for sure, but it sounds like the G string is flat and the B string is sharp. The open G note (third string) and the 3rd fret D note (B string) are supposed to form a perfect 5th which is an interval with no "beats." Your 5th is out of tune because it's too wide and has fast "beats" - I.E. the B string is sharp or the G string is flat or a combonation of the two. Nice song, though. Thanks,
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korn3lius
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ic..ic..good ear Dan. i got your points now. I've thought i have a problem with my guitar 5th string, I'll try to tune it correctly but still heard weird when i press C in 5th string (I transpose this song -1 , so the G heard G flat). thanks for your reply Dan, really appreciate it
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