mopetka - uniun (second creation)

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2011/11/27 00:48:50 (permalink)

mopetka - uniun (second creation)

Mine second creation.

Feedback please,

thank you


Mopetka uniun
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    Scottytunes
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    Re:mopetka - uniun (second creation) 2011/11/27 06:25:06 (permalink)
    You have a nice mix here. My only crit is that I was bored by hearing the same drum beat throughout the body of the tune. Some rhythmical and musical change ups would help to keep the listener's attention.

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    modjo
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    Re:mopetka - uniun (second creation) 2011/11/27 07:53:21 (permalink)
    Thank you.

    Well i'm just getting used to program and still learning from it everyday, and to make some rhytmical or musicial changes is bit difficult to me.. so trying to make it simple for beggining.. but it will be heard on my other tunes when i get to know program better or to make some tricky parts.
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    Re:mopetka - uniun (second creation) 2011/11/27 17:27:14 (permalink)
    As a mix, it sounds good. It's just boring though. It needs more life. Add some words to liven it up and It will probably be fine as it is.

    Other than that, Well done!

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    Re:mopetka - uniun (second creation) 2011/11/28 05:41:10 (permalink)
    thank you,


    will have this in my mind for other songs.
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    Re:mopetka - uniun (second creation) 2011/12/02 10:03:23 (permalink)
    It really goes too long in the intro, 40 sec I believe.  Then it doesn't really change till about 1:38 and goes back to the same beat with some musical background.  I think it's a good start to something and it's well produced, just needs more "thingys".  :-)  Keep em' comin!!

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