my remix for one remix contest

hi,
 
this is a remix of a song i made to participate in remix context.
the only thing taken from original track was vocals.
initially my goal was to make a track in certain time range.
so i was limited by time.
 
it took me 10 days to do the remix track.
this incuded writing parts, arrangement and mixing.
as for mastering - i have no idea how to master a track
so i just put limiter on master to adjust final volume.

all the work was done in Sonar Platinum
 
here is the remix i made:
https://soundcloud.com/mykhailo-skachkov/ivan-dorn-ty-vsegda-v-plyuse-mskachkov-remix

and here is the original song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pj8vgT8iiLc

the track is on Russian language.

i have to say that i'm not quite happy with results but it was
a good experience for me as a hobbyist to make track in 10 days.
 
if you have any comments/critics i would be happy to hear it so don't be shy :)