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2011/01/19 14:03:02 (permalink)

opinions welcome

Hi,

I created 3 videos with music from Sonar Producer and would like know your opinion:

Winterwald (Winter Forest)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QE0Nl35SRLs

Yellowstoned
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l8oXl16x3RQ

Yellowstoned Again
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EJW1OVM0cQU

Many thanks in advance!
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    Zuma
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    Re:opinions welcome 2011/01/20 22:19:33 (permalink)
    Meddler, huh? I've got that Floyd bootleg. "Winterwald" is gentle, trippy and understated... just the way I like it. I hear 70's Grateful Dead in the guit. You're definitely a Garcia disciple... being a Dead Head I can hear it. Very nice... I'll be on to the other two in a minute.
    post edited by Zuma - 2011/01/20 23:27:42

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    Re:opinions welcome 2011/01/20 22:35:36 (permalink)
    OK. "Yellowstoned" is again trippy... I guess that line is obligatory... but this time I think you need to add some more color as it's so long. Go all out Floyd for this one. Snatches of dialogue with delay ping ponging and such. Also could use some tasty Gilmour strat atmosphere ala "Another Brick in the Wall Pt.1"... damn I want some acid all of a sudden!
     
     
     
    Edit: Sorry. didn't realize you had another  version of this... listening now.
     
    The high def vid is taking some nut from my computer to buffer, lol.
    post edited by Zuma - 2011/01/20 22:43:36

    http://zumajunction.bandcamp.com/

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    Zuma
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    Re:opinions welcome 2011/01/20 23:07:02 (permalink)
    "Yellowstoned Again", same comments as above. Non trippers might not get it and the pace may puzzle the poor lost souls. I personally dig it but still think you could add some more colors... though not to the point where it becomes overstated and too busy. It's a fine balance that could either sound unfinished or over delivered/produced. If you leave it like it is you'll have the former in many peoples minds. You've got to add just a little more to this to hold peoples attention with that kind of time span. These are positive nits btw and meant to give you food for thought. If you're happy with it the way it is then just ignore everything I said. Nice work!!
    post edited by Zuma - 2011/01/20 23:08:32

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    meddler
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    Re:opinions welcome 2011/01/21 16:35:13 (permalink)
    Hi Zuma,

    thanks a lot for your comments!

    I feel about the same, Yellowstoned (& Again) could use some more .... "colors" is a great way to say it. There also other bits that are not perfect, like timing, but they were my first projects (too many things to learn at the same time :).

    "Winterwald" is my latest work where I tried to do it better.
     
    Next one is in the pipe...it's great fun :-)

    Thanks again and cheers!
    meddler
    (this is about how the German word for Metal Head sounds, that's why I chose it.
    However, I like Pink Floyd a lot - so that's even better)
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