out to charm the world - live today

This is a nice, simple arrangement of a pretty song. Not much to critique here, but two things stick out. One is the reverb on the lead vocal, it could be dialed back a bit so that it sounds like you're singing in the same space as your instruments, but that's a matter of personal taste. The other issue is there are a few places where the guitar line is kind of sticky or awkward with the rest of the instruments. IOW, the timing was a tad off, but not too much. Either of these things can easily be fixed if you're so inclined. Yet, all in all, not bad.

I like the song a lot.  First thing I thought is that you have a really nice voice and that it doesn't need a lot of enhancement.  So I agree with the reverb comments and I would add that the kick seems a little too powerful.  Those things said, I think it's a nice tune, well done and the crits are those born of personal perference.  It's a pretty song.