please give me some feed back

Hi Krieg,

You got some interesting stuff going on here, but it feels incomplete.  It sounds like ambience with a beat.  If you add a main melody line and some type of bass to supplement the beat I think you could really turn this into something.  I like what I hear so far.

I think you had the rest of the tracks muted when you mixed this down.  :P
Being that you were the lead singer, I somehow expected vocals in this.

Lot of nice beats, but now you have to work on putting it all together, and that takes years of having fun like you were doing with this piece. To listen to how to put beats and various sound effects together, click on my jrkcompendium link below and go to the music page. I create epic sounds for videos and movies with a wide varity of samples, beats, instrumentation and creative software. I have been doing this for quite sometime and a lot of patients and energy has been spent to get to this point, not to speak about the money I have spent. You have a nice start going, so just keep up the hard work and it will all pay off in the long run.

Blessings, John

This is well crafted mate...and appreciate the different sounds and textures....

But if your a lead singer....please get a vocal on the damn thing!

Cian