pop-funk feedback please

I think I can hear the song you have in here. I can tell where you want it to go. I'd strongly recommend you develop it a little further, or a lot further, before you let it out into public again! As a before picture, it's pretty good, and I'd like to hear the "after" picture as well!
 
I like the bones of your arrangement, seems like it's pretty solid. I'd be tempted to double those vocals for a little depth. Sadly, I couldn't pick Bruno Mars out of a line up, and he's probably the most successful songwriter in the last few years, I know, I know. That might be less of a compliment for his songwriting, and more a comment on the years.
 
good job, good night, and good luck!
-Tom

Not my genre but I will give you a pointer or two on the mix.
 
The vocals are too far out front and need to come back so you can hear the other elements. It appears that the drums may be too quite also.
 
I would start by muting the vocal and everything except the bass and the drums. then set the mix between the bass and drums first.  Then start adding the other elements back in and work with panning to find a place in the sound stage for everything.
 
Then bring your vocals back in and lower the volume so they just peek out over the rest of the music.
 
you may find the voice is hard to get right. If that happens use the analyzer to look at the frequency range the vocals are in. perhaps the 350hz range.
 
Once you have identified where the vocal is in the spectrum use the analyzer on each of the other tracks to see which are conflicting. Then use an eq to gently reduce that frequency in the conflicting tracks.
 
Hope this helps.

I agree about the vocals. But I do enjoy the song