put it back

Call it Glory just a loop at the moment, 
so don't listen if you only like full Length. 
I know it's far away from being full track
but i would like to hear what you think of that kind of style 
and of course on the mix. 

https://soundcloud.com/skeletor-beats/glory
 
Thanx

thanks Warren


10 hours without a pause (not clever)
i should better stop posting raw material.
after reading your post i listened to it again
and i gotta admit that the instruments were not placed good enough,
they have to be redefined
and some notes were missing 
because of that the loop has not the right dynamics (Swing)
but i am sure i can fix it.
Oh and the drums....
well i did use a standard drum kit and lifting it up was very hard.
Maybe i should replace the kick and snare with some better ones.

and the vox samples are missplaced. 
they should make it more intressting but the oppisite was the case.
i should better write songs again instead of creating beats for a while

long story short

i will remove the link to this version.

Thanks 

Warren you were just HONEST to me, so it is all good ;-)

You are absolutly right,
it is really a decent way to get some advice before going to far.

this is one of the main reasons why i post and ask for some feedback.




i removed the link because i did notice too many mistakes after listening 
to it again.


i will put back the link 
and let's see what other listeners say. 

once again thanx for being honest.


All the Best

thanx John did not have much time for improving things, for making music at all. now i am back and have done some lill improvements such as spreading things and cleaning the sounds. Once again thanx for the constructive crtism and sorry for the late reply All the Best SK

Thanx Vicente i know what to do but I ask myself if are people going to like that Over doin things is good after few days i hear things much more clear ;-) Once again a Big thank you.