"Rocking heart" - with a few extra touches

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2016/06/28 14:12:31 (permalink)

"Rocking heart" - with a few extra touches

Hi
This is another misic idea of mine.
Opinions and suggestions are welcome!
Thanks for listening!
 
https://soundcloud.com/us.-621970950/rocking-heart
post edited by humanrock - 2016/07/02 11:04:04
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    ABull
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    Re: "Rocking heart" - new recording 2016/07/01 20:34:32 (permalink)
    Hey, this is a good rhythm track for a rocker -- all it needs is some vocals on that sucker and you're good.  That thumpin' bass and the sound of the guitars from the beginning reminded me in style a little of Van Halen -- and that's a good thing.  !!
     
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    Re: "Rocking heart" - new recording 2016/07/01 21:43:33 (permalink)
    I like it, it had my head boppin' from the very first measure.  I can't wait to hear what you do with it.
    It sounds almost complete except for the vocals, and with that kind of riff, they should just fall easily into place.

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    Re: "Rocking heart" - new recording 2016/07/02 04:21:05 (permalink)
    Allan and Lee,
     
    Thanks for taking the time and energy to listen to my recording. I will try to make it sound better and I will reupload it.
    Vocals: english is not my native language it is not too simple to write some "rocking" lyrics to it so that everyne woud understand.... bacically writing good lyrics is not easy... so I dont know... I will see!
    Thanks again!
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    Re: "Rocking heart" - new recording 2016/07/02 10:46:52 (permalink)
    I have workes n the recording a little bit. The result is uploaded.
     
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    Re: "Rocking heart" - new recording 2016/07/02 11:08:27 (permalink)
    Has a nice feel to it... needs some vocals to make it fly.

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    Re: "Rocking heart" - new recording 2016/07/03 07:29:41 (permalink)
    Listened to this yesterday, excellent tightly played and well recorded rocker. Perfect backing track for a Bryan Adams style song.

     
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    Re: "Rocking heart" - new recording 2016/07/03 09:49:01 (permalink)
    Thank you Phil and James(I guess)!
     
    By the way James: Willowman and Calico&Sawdust are absolutely favorites of mine. Great songs and I think you have a very good voice: Peter Gagriel, Sting and Rod Stewart-like.
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    Re: "Rocking heart" - new recording 2016/07/03 10:32:06 (permalink)
    humanrock
     
     
    By the way James: Willowman and Calico&Sawdust are absolutely favorites of mine. Great songs and I think you have a very good voice: Peter Gagriel, Sting and Rod Stewart-like.





     
    Thanks, glad you like them! Not me singing though, that's Tim Wilkinson who also wrote the songs.

     
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    Re: "Rocking heart" - new recording 2016/07/03 17:04:42 (permalink)
    Good start! It just needs some vocals and you're on your way. The drums could be better but everything is there minus the vocals.
     
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    Re: "Rocking heart" - new recording 2016/07/04 16:22:51 (permalink)
    as above, with the right vocal and maybe memorable lead riff/motif this will be great.
    you might want to change up the rhythm guitars at some point, maybe some ringing open chords or arpegiatted chords, just to spare the listener's ear. the synth adds a new dimension when it appears, but until we hear some vocals (sing in whatever language you want!) it will forever remain a project, not a song!

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