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"This is Love" - added everything but the drums
The same tracks except for the vocal. I knew if the singer listened to it a few times she would want to do better. And I brought in a backing female singer and just let her do what she wanted. It came out nicely, I think adding development. Then the lead singer had to add some high vocals. Anyway, still have the rights for the song by PJ Harvey. Any comments welcome. Here https://soundcloud.com/#rm101-1/this-is-love and in the sig
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/06 21:29:23
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Well I thought it sounded great even without the kit... love the sound of the guitars... great vocal performances too.. great work @...
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/06 22:24:31
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Yes, very nicely done, even without the kit. Nice guitar sound and vocals fit right in there. Nice mix. Peace and Blessings, John
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/07 01:19:49
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Thanks for the listen, guys. @
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/07 09:20:03
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Is the song missing? Sorry to have missed it.
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/07 14:55:04
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It should be on the souncloud site in my signature, Mike. Only the drums shouldn't be there - but then they never were. If there is a problem ... @
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/07 16:54:21
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I found it. Your signature link worked but for some reason the direct link still doesn't work for me. (Chrome in Win7) The vocals sound very nice, maybe too nice. The guitar playing sounds cool, vibey, and tight. I think the drums will add a lot of energy to the overall feel. Thanks for sharing. best regards, mike
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/07 17:37:22
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Love it bro, sweet guitar work!
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/07 20:46:08
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Thanks guys. Mike, that was a joke from the last time I put this song out. Several people wanted drums, but I've been doing this kind of acoustic stuff sans drums and most of it works fine. Frankly, it is a pain to schedule drums at the house and my programming chops aren't up to it if I can't lay it on a grid. I guess I need to start w/ drums, but I like how the bassist/guitarist and singer groove together. They do some of the songs live & I like the vibe. @
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/07 20:58:44
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mike_mccue The vocals sound very nice, maybe too nice. The guitar playing sounds cool, vibey, and tight.
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/07 21:00:16
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oops. Sorry. I guess after I read your comment I kind of heard the drums in my head. In all honesty, when I was done listening I flashed on the idea that it is sort of tamed down, old timey, Jefferson Airplane thing going on and drums were part of that imagined impression. The vocals seem beautiful but perhaps emotionally displaced from the vibe of the guitar part. I never heard the PJHarvey version but I am guessing it's a bit edgier or rev'ed up in feel. I think I was imagining a bit more edge or drive to serve as a foil to the sweetness of the vocal delivery. I'm way past my comfort level of commenting on someone else's art. I like to live and let live and try to avoid making suggestions like you should add drums. I wish I'd understood the circumstance better beforehand and I didn't put my foot in my mouth, but I figured I should explain it now that I have. :-) I'm going to change my mind and say I like it just the way it is for what it is. :-) Bring it on! all the best, mike
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/08 01:12:13
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I understand, Mike. It was just there was a lot of wondering about the lack in drums in the earlier version, since it is pretty straight ahead rock and roll. So I was just funning about that. The PJ version has drums, of course. My wife (lead vocals) did another version w/ her band and it had drums (and sax). But she had a guitarist and bassist over for an acoustic gig and they started fooling around w/ a slower version of the song and that is when I broke out the mics. I thought a stripped down version would work - something a little different. @
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/08 06:54:56
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/08 08:50:03
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When I click the link from your first post I get a totally different song - I don't think this is your song. When I click on Mike's link I get your song. Your link has a "#" which seems to confuse soundcloud.
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/08 12:14:36
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Soundcloud always seems to do this. I think the problem is that it is my sub site - so the link syncs to the owner's version of the page. I haven't found a way to get rid of that hashtag w/o putting it in word or something since everytime I just try to edit it I click and go to the song on my Soundcloud. Sorry about that everyone. And yea guitartrek, "This is Love" is the second song. even I manage to finish a song every month or so. And unless you go pro w/ Soundcloud, you can't move songs higher. "Under my Spell" is one the singer wrote, but using the same techniques. That one doesn't have drums either, but bongos. @
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/09 11:58:52
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AT, this sounds just great without drums. The overall feel is kinda retro, which I like. It's tight and funky, and I would just leave it alone for now. You may change your mind later, but it stands on its own.
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/09 12:34:08
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Great arrangement and vocals. i like the way it builds towards the end. I usually start with the drums
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/09 12:34:27
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Thanks Lynn and others for the listen. Yea, I think I'm finished w/ it. When you find yourself changing things by 1 db, it is time to print and move on.
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/09 13:28:59
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I kept waiting for the drums..lol...only because you mentioned it. Doesn't need them really. I liked your tones on both guitars and the panning was perfect. The vocalist reminds me of the girl who sings " Black Velvet" at least I think that's what the song is called, might be wrong. Is this the last take, or were you thinking of maybe playing with the structure a bit? It sounds good as it is, just curious if this is as far as you intend to take it.
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/09 13:55:26
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Starise, Can't take credit for the guitars - big old tube fender tho the Portico II is mine (and the cheapo ribbon). The singer actually does Black Velvet w/ a live band. So she'll like the reference to Alannah. And I'm finished w/ it except for some mastering through outboard. One more song to put some vocals on and then master them all (sounds like a Tolkien phrase) and the CD is finished. Famous last words... Thanks, @
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/09 14:24:14
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I like the vibe the missing drums add some tension, nice Thanks for sharing
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/09 22:43:34
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/17 10:39:59
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Your wife is an excellent singer, and the guitar riffing is tasty! Creative take on this awesome song. Nice job!
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/17 16:50:45
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Thanks Waltenstein, not exactly ambient or electronic. More like Appalachian Electro. ;-) @
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Re: "This is Love" - added everything but the drums
2013/09/17 18:08:32
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Very atmospheric, like Alabama 3 in a smokier room with a 45 watt light-bulb. Liked it a lot. Good Job!
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