"Up on the Wheel" (New Mix 2 18 17)

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"Up on the Wheel" (New Mix 2 18 17)

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Hate or like it... It's done! lol I hate it but that's me... ;)
 
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    dcumpian
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    Re: "Up on the Wheel" (New Mix) 1 12 17 2017/01/13 08:39:25 (permalink)
    Primarily, everything sounds very narrow, and like I'm listening through an old telephone. Fix that first.
     
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    Re: "Up on the Wheel" (New Mix) 1 12 17 2017/01/13 12:45:25 (permalink)
    dcumpian
    Primarily, everything sounds very narrow, and like I'm listening through an old telephone. Fix that first.
     
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    ^^^^^ This ^^^^^
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    Re: "Up on the Wheel" (New Mix) 1 12 17 2017/01/13 12:46:29 (permalink)
    Maybe sing more than three notes (which I'm guilty of too) 
     
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    Re: "Up on the Wheel" (New Mix) 1 12 17 2017/01/13 12:51:59 (permalink)
    Have to agree with Dan's observation, very narrow sound stage and narrow frequency range. Will keep an eye out for the remix. 

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    Re: "Up on the Wheel" (New Mix) 1 12 17 2017/01/13 22:00:44 (permalink)
    Thanks folks! :)
    Someone else was suppose to sing it and they are too busy. I'm just going to call it art and leave the vocals! lol.
    I have no choice on that right now.
    I agree now that you all pointed it out. it's thin. I will try and fix that but kind of busy for a couple weeks...
     
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    Re: "Up on the Wheel" (New Mix) 1 12 17 2017/02/18 07:13:28 (permalink)
    Let me know what you think. :)

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    Re: "Up on the Wheel" (New Mix) 1 12 17 2017/02/21 00:37:21 (permalink)
    If you are going for an early-Beatles-meets-Nascar vibe, add a harmony vocal on the chorus and you've nailed it!!!
     
    I get your constraints, but I totally get what you are trying to do. I think you could get a different tone on that lead guitar, it sounds very thin and just noodles around, and it sounds kind of like you recorded it with a heavy blanket over the amp. The rhythm guitar sounds much, much better - its very clear and well-mixed.
     
    Maybe drop the lead guitar out of the background while the vocal is doing its thing? Just a thought.
     
    cheers, hope you get some time for it!
     
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    Re: "Up on the Wheel" (New Mix) 1 12 17 2017/02/21 00:59:15 (permalink)
    emeraldsoul
    If you are going for an early-Beatles-meets-Nascar vibe, add a harmony vocal on the chorus and you've nailed it!!!
     
    I get your constraints, but I totally get what you are trying to do. I think you could get a different tone on that lead guitar, it sounds very thin and just noodles around, and it sounds kind of like you recorded it with a heavy blanket over the amp. The rhythm guitar sounds much, much better - its very clear and well-mixed.
     
    Maybe drop the lead guitar out of the background while the vocal is doing its thing? Just a thought.
     
    cheers, hope you get some time for it!
     
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    Hello, thanks for the reply, I really don't think about any type of style or anything. lol I just do what I do the best I can and that's where it lands. :)  

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