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Sounds good to me

This song has potential, but I agree with kakku about the guitar playing-it's not ready for prime time.  The other issue that I hear is that the overall mix is muddy on my system.  If you cut frequencies around 200-250hz, it might help clear things up.  A slight boost around 3000hz would give this a little sparkle.  Also, if you spread things in the panning, it would help to open up this mix and give it some breathing space.  Otherwise, good effort and good luck.

Interesting song, the lyrics are good, avoiding cliche's. There's a fair amount of out of tune (lead guitar) or out of key stuff (synth arpeggios) going on though, which is a shame. I'd be inclined to strip this back at the start and then add elements gradually to build the song.

Thanks guys!
 
The matching key part to the guitar is done with a GR20 guitar Synth. There are 3 parts actually. The guitar part which is exactly what I played. The GR20 Synth part which is sorta close. And the Midi sent to Sonar which doesn't catch a lot of the bends and the slides... hammer on pull offs. I actually really like it that it doesn't track exactly. It's a bit like a lingering ghost.
 
The different synths take pitch bends differently. It's all hopelessly goofy and fun.
 
It's on my list to return to it, but I've got 2 hours of 12 track recording to mix and I'm making a 16 track on Friday, so I may never get back to this. I'm not in the band or anything. I was just trying to have some fun with a quick idea recording I made for my female vocalist friend to send to her out of town bandmates.
 
I'm just the guy with mics for her. My part was just goofy fun, and I still like it. I've listened to it a few more times. The stuttering rhyth... the key shifts and goofy sounds... the play with the decimator biFilter. It's a smile for me.

Oh and btw, SteveC, there is a delay on the vocal but it's lost in the soupy mess. :-)
The delay on vocal is dotted eigth at 17% feedback and -20 dB level. the filter peaks around 1.2K. Saturation is on and there are 2 biFilter's stacked on the vocal.

Cool song! The mix needs help. Just out of curiosity, how old is the guitar player? Time playing? If he's a fairly new player then he just need to keep it up. He's searching so that's a plus.
 
Again, cool song!

Guitar player is 44 and he's me. Still learning, of course. I probably played thirty leads and just kept the last one indiscriminately.

All that needs to said about this track is written above, it sounds like you have a good tune and some interesting lyrics however here it comes across very much stuck in the mire with to much happening at one time.
 
We all have to learn some how and you will find invaluable help from the good peeps here.
 
Thanks for sharing.