simpleone update.2

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Boomin36Beatz
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2012/03/10 17:08:00 (permalink)

simpleone update.2

just started
what does it sound like ????
is it worth spending time on it ???
some critics would be nice.
so...

thanx in advance

post edited by Boomin36Beatz - 2012/08/24 04:08:52
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    Lynn
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    Re:simpleone 2012/03/11 11:37:18 (permalink)
    It's hard to answer your question because your selection is so short and undeveloped.  This could be a silk purse or a sow's ear if you know what I mean.  At this point, there's nothing really to point to, yet, any song that begins with Am-G can turn into something interesting.  Let's hear a little more of the song structure; give us something with a verse, chorus, bridge, etc.  Even the beats are rudimentary at this point.  More cake and less icing.

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    Re:simpleone 2012/03/11 11:45:54 (permalink)
    Starts with good drama. Fades, then returns to the same drama.

    You have a catchy run. Go listen to Grenade by Bruno Mars and pay special attention to how this type of run could be used ambiently and not as the main focus. Then come up with a vocal hook.

    I think you have the basis for something to start with. But I agree with Lynn, we need some more meat on the bone.

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    Re:simpleone 2012/03/12 07:31:03 (permalink)
    first of all thanx for the feedback
    i gotta admitt it is really too short.
    i will keep on working on and try my best
    i have already cleaned up the sound a bit.

    next i am a make it longer(structure)
    and add some mo elments.

    once again
    thanx

    post edited by Boomin36Beatz - 2012/08/24 04:09:48
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    Boomin36Beatz
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    Re:simpleone 2012/03/13 11:30:17 (permalink)
    i hope that it has got more meat on the bone now.
    as next i am a try to make the sounds sound more intressting
    and the drums too.
    constructive critics are still welcome.

      

    Thanx
    post edited by Boomin36Beatz - 2012/08/24 04:10:39
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