drma173
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"solo" my first rock song
hello this is my first rock song that I ever did. Most of you guys heard my stuff before, they usually not this genre of music. It's produce by my friend "B.Key" and mixed by me. let me know what you guys think again it my first. https://soundcloud.com/tony_jay/solol
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/03/31 00:41:30
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Well, it wasn't really bad at all. My problem and many others in this forum would be the Hispanic singing, especially when we are not Hispanic and are in the English speaking world of music. The over all production sound was clean and clear. The vocals, for me would need to come up forward in the mix, as the other music seem to drown them out. Remember, when there are vocals in a song they have number one priority in the mix, over everything else. Other than that, you have a great start on this song. Also, don't forget to pan everything out to different locations in the mix, you want everything to be heard clearly and not all mixed into the center, nor left or right in the same locations. Your almost there and doing a fine job so far. Now just tweak each track for clarity.
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/03/31 13:54:22
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Nice guitar tone played and executed well. Mixed very well. Not sure what the song is about but it sounds fine. The vocals seem well placed in the mix on my monitors. Only issue is with the abrupt ending.
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/03/31 16:06:31
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You nailed it bro!! And yes I am the guitar player for those wondering. Unlike some of these other freaks out there I am honest and not afraid of who I am. Glad you posted this, and loved the remix dude!!!
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/03/31 16:48:08
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/04/01 11:03:50
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/04/01 11:16:51
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Tony, well done! The mix sounded good here. I must take issue with anyone being critical of this song sung in SPANISH ( there is no such language as Hispanic!). There are no rules about language here. I've heard several other languages other than English here, as this forum is open to anybody in the world. This is the World Wide Web, not the American web.
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/04/01 12:32:08
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Best song I've heard from you yet! Well done and good mix too.
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/04/01 20:54:54
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I thought the vocals were pretty solid, and the way you mixed it sounded great. The rhythm guitar and clean guitar tones were good. I wasn't crazy about the lead tone, and there are some sour notes in the soloing. The mix overall was very clean, and the song itself is impressive. Thanks for sharing it! (BTW: I agree with Lynn. Good vocals in any language should be appreciated.)
post edited by tfbattag - 2013/04/01 21:01:07
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/04/01 23:05:25
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I like your voice and guitar on this. Nice.
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/04/03 14:35:11
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/04/05 19:04:32
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Lovely guitar tone, nice playing too...good tune, simple arrangement but nicely balanced and punchy without being in your face compressed and painful. Very listenable...and thats got to be good
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/04/07 08:29:36
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Nice ! Can you translate the lyrics for all of us here on the forum because I don't understand that lauguage .
Nice job to you and Bobby - James
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/04/07 15:26:05
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For a first song in this style you've done exceptionally well.
Excellent guitar by Bobby with some great tones.
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/04/08 08:53:36
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Nice guitar work. Great vocals!!! The sound was pretty clear. The only thing I missed was a "hook". Rock in Spanish works really well. If you're interested, check out a band called HEROES DEL SILENCIO. They're from Spain. They had major success in the 90's with their music. Maybe you'll find some inspiration, there!
Anyways, keep up the good work, dude!!
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Re:"solo" my first rock song
2013/04/20 23:26:08
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thats my friend b keys on the guitar
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