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2012/12/09 16:40:59 (permalink)

thriller

hi !
this track is something Ive been working on.Its guitar with strings and things :)
Its called Thriller,please follow the link :)
Kev
 
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    Lynn
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/09 17:35:48 (permalink)
    This piece is very dark compared to what I've been listening to lately.  It would make a nice bit of background music in a film or video.  By itself, the mix is clear and balanced, yet the overall feel is that it is definitely sequenced.  Some of this is just keyboard technique.   This is not a major problem and doesn't take away from the ominous vibe of the song.  Very interesting;  I wonder if you are planning on doing anything else to this.

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    Re:thriller 2012/12/09 17:55:09 (permalink)
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    This piece is very dark compared to what I've been listening to lately.  It would make a nice bit of background music in a film or video.  By itself, the mix is clear and balanced, yet the overall feel is that it is definitely sequenced.  Some of this is just keyboard technique.   This is not a major problem and doesn't take away from the ominous vibe of the song.  Very interesting;  I wonder if you are planning on doing anything else to this.

    hi !
    I'm pleased the mix is clear.But what do you mean by sequenced ? U think the strings sound like they're played on a keyboard u mean ?! Yes I think this too,for this track I spent more time recording on the keyboard and much less so editing (inputting the notes) So it does sound pianistic,but I'm not sure if this is what you mean :) lol
    Anyway thanks for listening,its great to have your input !!
    Kev
     
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/09 18:35:59 (permalink)
    Kev, that is exactly what I mean.  I heard it in the flute more than anything, but I run into this problem myself.  It helps to have some knowledge of how each instrument is played, and randomizations of individual note velocities can do wonders.  But, mind you, this is not a major problem.  Just remember that monophonic instruments can't run notes together, and woodwinds and the like have to take a breath now and then.  If I'm telling you what you already know then my apology.  The song is good enough to get it right.

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    Re:thriller 2012/12/09 18:51:13 (permalink)
    Strange & exotic...  very cool...

    I like it a lot...
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/09 20:37:41 (permalink)
    This takes me to far away dark places.

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    Re:thriller 2012/12/10 14:49:24 (permalink)
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    Kev, that is exactly what I mean.  I heard it in the flute more than anything, but I run into this problem myself.  It helps to have some knowledge of how each instrument is played, and randomizations of individual note velocities can do wonders.  But, mind you, this is not a major problem.  Just remember that monophonic instruments can't run notes together, and woodwinds and the like have to take a breath now and then.  If I'm telling you what you already know then my apology.  The song is good enough to get it right.

    Hi Lynn,
    Yes its a tough one as its necessary to have real playable parts and then make those parts sound real too !! I'm getting better with the orchestral instruments,I'm familiar with the ranges of the string section and such like.Woodwinds yep its hard to gauge sometimes how much breath they'd need in real life !!! I think the only way to really understand and improve these things is score study and seeing how composers / arrangers have used these instruments themselves.Thats what I'm tryig to do a little more of,and its an interesting way to go,theres lots of amazing music out there to learn from !
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/10 14:50:28 (permalink)
    notnat


    Strange & exotic...  very cool...

    I like it a lot...
    Hey thanks for checking it out !
    Kev
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/10 14:51:28 (permalink)
    Scottytunes


    This takes me to far away dark places.


    ohhhhhhhh !!!
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/10 15:09:47 (permalink)
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    notnat


    Strange & exotic...  very cool...

    I like it a lot...
    Hey thanks for checking it out !
    Kev

    Hey, no prob, thank you for posting... You are very talented...
    It's none of my business, but you would probably get a lot more listeners and feedback if you offered more feedback for others... I've listened to your music for years, but don't often comment, because you don't...
    post edited by notnat - 2012/12/10 15:12:36
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/10 18:12:39 (permalink)
    For me it started in a Turkish casbah by Istanbul somewhere then it grooved to be a little more international but the pictures of the rug selling follows me - nice work.
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/10 18:35:38 (permalink)
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    For me it started in a Turkish casbah by Istanbul somewhere then it grooved to be a little more international but the pictures of the rug selling follows me - nice work.

    hi ! yes theres definately an eastern vibe in there somewhere :) Thank u,glad u liked it.
    Kev
     
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/10 20:44:29 (permalink)
    Very nice oriental vibe! I was floating away on my magic carpet... and then it was over all over already, leaving me wanting for more. :) Will there be a part 2?

    - Mark


     
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/10 20:46:05 (permalink)
    I like the way you use a modern drum kit with the orchestration.  Very cool eastern vibe.  On my end the mix is sounding a little muddy and could use some more high end.  Excellent job!

    Kev
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/11 07:17:36 (permalink)
    Hi.  I really like the concept, and the mix seems well-balanced to me.  The piece is a little dark, but good for your intended purpose... however, the actual TIMBRE of the song seems dark to me, as if there is a newspaper of my speaker.  I'm wondering if a touch of high end enhancement might add a little shine or sparkle to the mix.

    Good job!

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    Re:thriller 2012/12/11 09:33:34 (permalink)
     A very middle eastern feel to this one. I like the middle eastern music. Although it has a middle eastern feel it uses traditional western instruments and this is not something I always hear. I could think of a few ways to make it really exotic but I don't think you wanted comments on a re write. The mix was ok here at this end. Nice arrangement!

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    Re:thriller 2012/12/11 13:00:50 (permalink)
    I liked it. Sounds like something from a Bond film. I think it's crying out for some ethnic percussion in it.
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/11 17:55:45 (permalink)
    zybermark


    Very nice oriental vibe! I was floating away on my magic carpet... and then it was over all over already, leaving me wanting for more. :) Will there be a part 2?

    - Mark


    aye keep that magic carpet close to hand,there may be a second part
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/11 17:57:07 (permalink)
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    I like the way you use a modern drum kit with the orchestration.  Very cool eastern vibe.  On my end the mix is sounding a little muddy and could use some more high end.  Excellent job!

    Kev

    Hey Kev
    I'll have to have another listen regards the top end,another poster commented on that too !! Thanks for listening,glad u liked it :)
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/11 17:59:05 (permalink)
    tbosco


    Hi.  I really like the concept, and the mix seems well-balanced to me.  The piece is a little dark, but good for your intended purpose... however, the actual TIMBRE of the song seems dark to me, as if there is a newspaper of my speaker.  I'm wondering if a touch of high end enhancement might add a little shine or sparkle to the mix.

    Good job!

    Hi !!
    Might too much verb sucking the highs out of it ? Theres plenty of elements which should make the mix bright,I'm guessing its prob a mixing issue.Anyway I need a fresh listen !! Glad u digged the concept :)
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/11 18:00:45 (permalink)
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    I liked it. Sounds like something from a Bond film. I think it's crying out for some ethnic percussion in it.

    great  idea about the percussion,I might try that :)
     
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/11 23:24:11 (permalink)
    Really good Kev - I agree with the muddy crits but composition and arrangement fabulous.
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/12 07:54:06 (permalink)
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    Really good Kev - I agree with the muddy crits but composition and arrangement fabulous.

    ah ok ! ,maybe I need to look into that then ! Glad u digged the piece anyway :) Merry xmas !!!!!!
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    Re:thriller 2012/12/12 08:13:27 (permalink)
    It sounds good... and with a touch of the middle eastern mystique..... 

    The snare stuck out as being very dry compared to the other things.

    Trying to articulate an instrument which one does not play takes a bit of study and practice to get it sounding good enough to fool a player of that instrument. That comes with time.... but IMHO it sounds good and most folks who are not musicians will never pick up that small nit. 

    Nicely done.

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    Re:thriller 2012/12/13 05:29:41 (permalink)
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    It sounds good... and with a touch of the middle eastern mystique..... 

    The snare stuck out as being very dry compared to the other things.

    Trying to articulate an instrument which one does not play takes a bit of study and practice to get it sounding good enough to fool a player of that instrument. That comes with time.... but IMHO it sounds good and most folks who are not musicians will never pick up that small nit. 

    Nicely done.

    hey !
     
    Yes for the drums I used a small room reverb for the entire kit,maybe it does sound a bit odd in the sense all the other instruments have got longish verbs on them ?
     
    Learning other instruments is a massive challenge definately !!!!! Its a fun journey though,and like u say the more u do,the better it becomes,so yep defo,keep plodding on !!!!
     
    thanks for listening :)
     
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