Private Lessons online ?

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gonna find out of this web site works -

anyone here every try it -

click through my profile  -- see any typos?



don't forget the review page and others too - >> http://www.privatelessons.com/DAYPOINT/media/editreviews.asp?mode=view&userid=9826

Paul Has been teaching...

The first "H" should be lower case.

He graduated VanderCook

He graduated from...

and his Masters degree

Master's degree

clever, humble, and last but not least,

Shouldn't have comma after humble.


Good luck.

I don't see any typos here. 

But the site could use a bit bigger fonts somehow...I was having to use zoom on it as I got rather miserable eyesight .

Good layout..lots of space that can be utilized...

BTW..who are you having as your webhost?

marcos69


Paul Has been teaching...

The first "H" should be lower case.

He graduated VanderCook

He graduated from...

and his Masters degree

Master's degree

clever, humble, and last but not least,

Shouldn't have comma after humble.


Good luck.

Fixed 


thanks Marcos 

trimph1


I don't see any typos here. 

But the site could use a bit bigger fonts somehow...I was having to use zoom on it as I got rather miserable eyesight .

Good layout..lots of space that can be utilized...

BTW..who are you having as your webhost?

its privatelessons.com 


I sighned up to their web site - they advertise for me 




I don't know who they use for a web host  - 


I dunno if I'll get any students from it either -- but giving it a shot - it was 100 bucks for one year 

Paul Studied 17 different instruments

Should be a lower case 's' in studied.

+1 for larger fonts.

philz


Paul Studied 17 different instruments

Should be a lower case 's' in studied.

+1 for larger fonts.

fixed 




thanks Philz 

Dont forget the review pages too >> http://www.privatelessons.com/DAYPOINT/media/editreviews.asp?mode=view&userid=9826

well - since that page is "letters of recommendation" then they should be verbatim what the person wrote regardless of grammer, punctuation or other mistakes.

Since your studio was mentioned maybe you
could expand with audio examples and that you
can also teach or incorporate recording into the
lessons.

Mooch4056



I dunno if I'll get any students from it either -- but giving it a shot - it was 100 bucks for one year 

We have a friend who teaches harp over the internet and has done pretty well with it.  It took a while to build up her client list, but seems to have a good momentum now.  Good luck!

Beagle


well - since that page is "letters of recommendation" then they should be verbatim what the person wrote regardless of grammer, punctuation or other mistakes.

Gotta disagree with you here Reece. It's a common practice for editors to correct and edit submissions. As long as there is no skewing of the intent of the message, I think they need to do a little corrective editing. It can also help the grammatically challenged appear less so.
 
Randy

rsp@odyssey.net

Beagle


well - since that page is "letters of recommendation" then they should be verbatim what the person wrote regardless of grammer, punctuation or other mistakes.

Gotta disagree with you here Reece. It's a common practice for editors to correct and edit submissions. As long as there is no skewing of the intent of the message, I think they need to do a little corrective editing. It can also help the grammatically challenged appear less so.
 
Randy

ok - in that case there are a few errors. 
 
extraneous comma after "parents,"
Only 1 space between period of 1st sentence and beginning of 2nd (there should be 2 spaces between sentences).
extra space after period of 2nd sentence and quote mark
 
2nd one:
Only 1 space between period of 1st sentence and beginning of 2nd.
extraneous comma after "music,"
 
3rd one:
completely false and incorrect statement (and there's an extra space after the "!" before the end quote).
 
picture:  too ugly
 
seriously on the picture, tho, your face is distorted like the software for the upload of the pic re-sized your picture and it's wider than it used to be.
 
most important problem:
no mention of becan or bapu.

Jeez, what anal retentive jerk!

There ya go, Paul.    Nice. 

I agree about the bigger font. WAY bigger....this needs to stand out...fill up the page sorta. 

All the best!!

rsp@odyssey.net


Jeez, what anal retentive jerk!

NO SOUP FOR YOU!

lol , good luck Mooch

My friend, I wish you all the best in this endeavor. You know I'll support you any that I can as long as it is morally and legally responsible.

Beagle

rsp@odyssey.net

Beagle


well - since that page is "letters of recommendation" then they should be verbatim what the person wrote regardless of grammer, punctuation or other mistakes.

Gotta disagree with you here Reece. It's a common practice for editors to correct and edit submissions. As long as there is no skewing of the intent of the message, I think they need to do a little corrective editing. It can also help the grammatically challenged appear less so.
 
Randy

ok - in that case there are a few errors. 
 
extraneous comma after "parents,"
Only 1 space between period of 1st sentence and beginning of 2nd (there should be 2 spaces between sentences).
extra space after period of 2nd sentence and quote mark
 
2nd one:
Only 1 space between period of 1st sentence and beginning of 2nd.
extraneous comma after "music,"
 
3rd one:
completely false and incorrect statement (and there's an extra space after the "!" before the end quote).
 
picture:  too ugly
 
seriously on the picture, tho, your face is distorted like the software for the upload of the pic re-sized your picture and it's wider than it used to be.
 
most important problem:
no mention of becan or bapu.

Reece, I couldn't help but notice a few errors in your post. Mostly, the lack of proper capitalization. It may seem minor, but consider this. It's the difference between: Helping your Uncle Jack off a horse and helping your uncle jack off a horse.
Something to ponder my friend.
 
Randy

rsp@odyssey.net

Beagle

rsp@odyssey.net

Beagle


well - since that page is "letters of recommendation" then they should be verbatim what the person wrote regardless of grammer, punctuation or other mistakes.

Gotta disagree with you here Reece. It's a common practice for editors to correct and edit submissions. As long as there is no skewing of the intent of the message, I think they need to do a little corrective editing. It can also help the grammatically challenged appear less so.
 
Randy

ok - in that case there are a few errors. 
 
extraneous comma after "parents,"
Only 1 space between period of 1st sentence and beginning of 2nd (there should be 2 spaces between sentences).
extra space after period of 2nd sentence and quote mark
 
2nd one:
Only 1 space between period of 1st sentence and beginning of 2nd.
extraneous comma after "music,"
 
3rd one:
completely false and incorrect statement (and there's an extra space after the "!" before the end quote).
 
picture:  too ugly
 
seriously on the picture, tho, your face is distorted like the software for the upload of the pic re-sized your picture and it's wider than it used to be.
 
most important problem:
no mention of becan or bapu.

Reece, I couldn't help but notice a few errors in your post. Mostly, the lack of proper capitalization. It may seem minor, but consider this. It's the difference between: Helping your Uncle Jack off a horse and helping your uncle jack off a horse.
Something to ponder my friend.
 
Randy

You're absolutely right, Randy.  I shouldn't be allowed to post this kind of substandard communication.  Please accept my sincerest apology. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"I'll just nip off and shoot myself."

its privatelessons.com

Why is that not seeming like a surprise?

Does it have a sister site?

largechests.com

They should stick out as a pair.



btw Where is the seedy web cam page?

Bapu, answer me straight, was this your idea?

Jonbouy

Bapu, answer me straight, was this your idea? 

What are these ideas you speak of and how can I get some?

I'd like to participate in this thread, but I have chores to do.  I'll be throwing the cow over the fence some hay.