I liked the Girl in Granada melody...very surly. But when the distorted guitars come in, you totally lose your midrange...like completely. So it sounds pretty bad. And there's really no way to have meant to to do that. Because your vocal EQ remains intact.
You have a good voice - which is what I look for!
Sonar X1 / Zoom16 / ART Studio V3 / /Blue Bird Condenser mic / Ev vocal mics / and a fast PC. ; )
Schecter c-1+, Taylor Acoustic, Roland TD 6 Drumset, Fender Bass guitar, a butt load of guitar strings, Me at the helm...singing and picking..