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Good start for sure. 

If you're going for a Skrillex like dubstep sound, I would suggest hitting the lead a lot louder and a bit more grungy. Its a bit repetitive, maybe find a hook or two to interplay. Shake it up a bit.

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You've once again managed to give us one ingredient of a recipe and asked us to tell you if it will result in a finished product.  It's like asking if a cup of sugar will turn into a cake.  Yes, if you add other ingredients to the mix.  Otherwise, you're stuck with a cup of sugar.

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Lynn summed it up perfectly. It's a loop. It could be the basis of a great song or crap.

Its a good starting point for something electronic.

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first of all i would like to thanx you for taking time leaving a comment on this
lill loop start whatever you call it.
@Fox thanx the idea is not bad to give the lead more body.

@Dub Disciple
i will try to keep it far away from being crap.

@GuitarHacker
thank you very much.

last but not at least
@Lynn
like always you are absolutly right.
but i said its a starting point.
i've been asking for feedback only if i am not 100% sure about something.
in this case the whole style.
but i have something for your pleasure
 
i hope you will enjoy it.

the demo was made by me on a netbook single core 1,66 Ghz
of course all made inside of Sonar 8.
the melody and the vocal recordings.
long story short without Sonar i couldnt made it.
Thanx
Peace!!!

oh by the way i am really sorry for not listening to your music and leaving
a comment  like you did here, but
you have to know that my inet connection speed is really low very very low.
i can't listen not even to one song on soundclick i guess its because of
the livestream so....
I AM REALLY REALLY SORRY

once again Thank you very much for all the comments

PEACE!!!

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Thank you for including that demo. I enjoyed listening to it even though I don't understand German. I understand where you're coming from, and in the future I'll just comment on what you're looking for. This demo indicates to me that you're quite capable of producing a finished product, and a good one at that. Turn the segment that you posted into something like this, and you will put your name on the map.

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It sounds fine.  You could make a silk purse out of this.

All the best,
Lynn

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