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tclark
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2005/09/30 12:15:01 (permalink)

[track] deserted

Hiya. This was my little go at a really abstract piece. plz check it out and rate it accordingly!!!!!!!


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=345840&songID=2915420


T



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    blipp
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    RE: [track] deserted 2005/09/30 19:53:32 (permalink)
    Interesting and different. i enjoyed it. My only reservation is that maybe the bongo's seemed a bit out of place. Good work.

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    Trusty
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    RE: [track] deserted 2005/09/30 20:07:22 (permalink)
    I really dug the track. Man, these tracks posted today have been really good to my ears. I dfon't listen to this type of music usually, but this track was nice.

    P.S. What do you do with tracks like this?
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    cb8rwh
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    RE: [track] deserted 2005/09/30 20:07:41 (permalink)
    Hey freeky,

    listening now - very dark and brooding opening, nice. Liking the beats that came in around 1:28. Piano melody is nice and simple. I really like the building up of the instruments, created a nice tension. then the release - v cool. Not so keen on the drums when they come back. Nice touch with the laugh at the end!

    Altogether I liked it, a good soundtrack piece to me.

    cheers

    rich
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    fac
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    RE: [track] deserted 2005/09/30 20:11:26 (permalink)
    Nice...... very spacey at first....... then the beat comes up...... nice drums...... it becomes a little pop-ish but in a good way.....

    The bongos are not that bad but I would have preferred a different percussive sound, too.

    Nice piano. Good mix.

    And that's all I have to say about it

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    fschmierer
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    RE: [track] deserted 2005/09/30 20:47:40 (permalink)
    This is pretty nice. Like the percussion the best...good groove (first half for sure). Pianos sound good as well. Cool ending! Liked it.

    Fred Schmierer

    My friends call me Pap.
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    tclark
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    RE: [track] deserted 2005/10/02 15:10:23 (permalink)
    Hey thanks guys. really appreciate.



    ORIGINAL: Trusty

    P.S. What do you do with tracks like this?


    Depends what u mean. I usually uplaod them to soundclick!!! lol... not that funny is it...

    if u mean how to make, then ask :10:. He is by far the veteran in this class of music. Iv only made 2 attempts at this style. This one and DNA.

    keep the creativity going guys!

    T



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    :10:
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    RE: [track] deserted 2005/10/07 19:11:14 (permalink)
    love the opening noises...verydark....(wheres my evil smile smily?) nice dark drums, and the backing sound is pretty cool. simple, but effective. I like the piano that come's in.
    not sure I like the bongo's.
    I think they distrack from the whole of the song. uh oh...4/4 drum beat has to go..... sorry....try layering differnt style drums on top of each other.

    I really liked this track. sounds good.


    and thanks for the plug....

      
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    ecamburn
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    RE: [track] deserted 2005/10/08 02:39:45 (permalink)
    like others have said, the dark, somber opening is nice.

    I like the groove you get going once the beat kicks in. reminds me a bit of NIN.

    I like the idea you have about the bongos but don't like that particular voice at that point in the song. I think some sort of tuned percussion fits well in that section but bongos just don't seem like the way to go.

    Thought I heard some clipping on the drums around 4:30.

    Eric


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    tclark
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    RE: [track] deserted 2005/10/08 09:19:20 (permalink)

    ORIGINAL: :10:

    love th. uh oh...4/4 drum beat has to go..... sorry....try layering differnt style drums on top of each other.




    i know. I never liked them either but i never could b bothered 2 change them!!! :D maybe on some real release i will change them


    thx

    T



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    cb8rwh
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    RE: [track] deserted 2005/10/12 13:29:52 (permalink)
    hey freeky,

    to add another post to my previous one - been listening to this a few times and I really like it. As ecam says very NIN sounding!!! Just need a really distorted guitar in there

    rich
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