I think my favorite part was the piano sound, captivating.

Got this up loud Daryl, and it's sounding fantastic to my ear'oles. I love this ethereal kind of production. It's reminding me of something..Cocteau Twins, Blue Nile maybe? Doesn't matter really, it's a cracking song.

Nice, some serious talent Daryl.

Really beautiful tune, I like your vocal inflections.

Love the little panning trick.

I understand the reverb thing, it has that english Porteous Head sound, it does mask things a little.

I would suggest leaving the drums alone and try backing the vox verb off ever so slighty.  But Meh, it's your tune and you make the decisions on these things.

Really gorgous tune, I love the whole Englishness of your music.

Neb 

Hey Daryl, I just listened to the whole thing and wished it was longer!

Great chillout music, this mix doesn't need an awful lot of work to make it absolutely stellar.

One thing I might be tempted to do if it was me would be to narrow the drums up a bit.
Not make them totally mono, just a bit of narrowing with Channel Tools or something.

The low end comes over great on my Missions, but they are naturally a bit bassy so it's difficult to be totally objective

Good work.

I have this up LOUD on my monitors and I am really enjoying the song.  I listened to it on the phones a couple days ago and it sounded more effected.  I like everything about this tune, writing, production and performances.  Oh, loud in the monitors it isn't as effected, it seems.  I like it both ways.  The "telephone" voice (or megaphone) fit nicely.  Just all around cool.  Your wife reminds me of the girl who did 99 balloons.  I can't believe I forgot her name.  Age, I guess.  LOL!