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2016/04/06 15:37:55 (permalink)

Damned If I Do - bumped for election day

I'm giving this a quick bump for today only for obvious reasons
 
Hello folks
Here's a new song i wrote with a bit of social comment about the upcoming elections
Enjoy - nits and crits welcome.
https://soundcloud.com/skyblueproductions/election-rejection-damned-if-i-do
 
Damned if I do
Written and performed by Staypress
News flash courtesy alc31180 of freesound.org
V1
I'm stuck with a decision - exactly where to put my X
I've been sold with great precision and I know just what's coming next
Chorus
I'm damned if I do and I'm damned if I don't
But I can't help but feel that I'm wasting my vote
I'm caught between the devil and the deep blue sea
I know because I saw it on the BBC
V2
It's not a democratic vision to choose between fire and ice
I'm sick of politicians who promise me paradise
Chorus
Middle bit
...and the lesser of 2 evils is still evil
One is insane, the other not quite legal
One is fixated on building a wall
The other is determined to screw us all
V3
You can't trust your television - the news is what they want you to hear
So you have a brave decision to use your own mind my dear
Chorus
News flash
 
post edited by daryl1968 - 2016/11/08 16:11:25
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    bapu
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/06 16:23:44 (permalink)
    I'm just damned.
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/06 16:24:07 (permalink)
    Nice tune mate.
     
    I'm not politically inclined so the lyric did not resonate all that well with me. 
     
    post edited by bapu - 2016/06/04 16:17:58
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/07 06:36:50 (permalink)
    bapu
    I'm just damned.


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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/07 06:46:58 (permalink)
    Very good Daryl very good all round.
     

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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/07 08:59:31 (permalink)
    Very nice, quirky-sounding song Daryl! This sounds so English, you must be...lol.
     
    Excellent mix, as per usual. Love the lyrics on this one, everything flows really well.
     
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/07 11:30:07 (permalink)
    I wasn't going to post this here (forum rules, and all), but it sure is a good adjunct to this song!
     


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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/07 12:00:38 (permalink)
    I haven't listened to this yet, but I love the lyrics and how accurately portrayed!!  (I have some listening to do now....)

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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/07 19:39:26 (permalink)
    clear mix, bouncy yet depressing. A little Yaz-like which is always fun. I appreciated your background harmonies - barely perceptible but they do add a lot to the chorus.
     
    thanks, fear not, it's still cool to vote, it will all be ok. Except for the zombies
     
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/08 07:48:18 (permalink)
    Cool song... I read the lyrics first... nice work and spot on.

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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/09 11:08:19 (permalink)
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    Cool tune mate.
     


    Fanks mate
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/09 19:51:00 (permalink)
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    Very good Daryl very good all round.
     


    Thanks Wookster
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/10 10:13:12 (permalink)
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    Very nice, quirky-sounding song Daryl! This sounds so English, you must be...lol.
     
    Excellent mix, as per usual. Love the lyrics on this one, everything flows really well.
     
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    Thanks Dan. I maybe a little bit English...:)
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/10 10:42:54 (permalink)
    Very cool song! Have no fear, the republic has withstood a lot worse than this, and if you start feeling down, just write another one just like this. It's impossible to be anything but cheery with this tune playing. My wife says if you add a bunch of reverb you've got a perfect 80's dance tune. 

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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/10 12:32:05 (permalink)
    Liking the vibe a lot! Nice post new-wave feel and super clear production! Nice job.
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/10 18:50:55 (permalink)
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    I wasn't going to post this here (forum rules, and all), but it sure is a good adjunct to this song!
     





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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/10 19:14:05 (permalink)
    This song & message is very good Daryl  it's times like these I wish I sang and wrote lyrics …
    Very inventive , super easy to listen too . Your tune also has a nice toe tapper vibe …
    On a side note , while my toes were a tapping , I noticed that my middle finger got into the act and decided to pay homage to the main characters you had written the song about 
     
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/10 22:37:57 (permalink)
    Has a post-new wave feel.  :D
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/11 12:20:14 (permalink)
    Mesh
    I haven't listened to this yet, but I love the lyrics and how accurately portrayed!!  (I have some listening to do now....)




    I'm glad you liked the lyrics mate - did you get to listen to it?
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/11 14:47:55 (permalink)
    No more dissembling from me.
     
    post edited by ABull - 2017/01/23 18:06:34
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/11 17:20:55 (permalink)
    hehe, cool tune, quite infectious....
    i like the vocal mix so dry and effected for the clarity...
     
    dig the zombie approach...
    it hasn't been played out yet,
    and so apropo
     
    of course, i'd love to hear some edgy guitar,
    ala NIN, which would separate this from what people hear as '80's dance/pop....
    it's just a step to the left....
     
     

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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/11 17:52:52 (permalink)
    I think I figured out why we now have such a panoply of styles (shoegaze, psych, etc.etc)  It's due to Starbucks with the upside down no fatty brown green no sugar tea latte with no whip type thing.  The millenials think like that now.
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/11 19:13:40 (permalink)
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    clear mix, bouncy yet depressing. A little Yaz-like which is always fun. I appreciated your background harmonies - barely perceptible but they do add a lot to the chorus.
     
    thanks, fear not, it's still cool to vote, it will all be ok. Except for the zombies
     
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    Thanks Tom - I appreciate it.
     
    Bouncy yet depressing - there's a phrase you don't hear very often 
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/12 10:45:46 (permalink)
    Guitarhacker
    Cool song... I read the lyrics first... nice work and spot on.



    Thanks Herb - I really appreciate it
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/12 15:57:00 (permalink)
    Great work, Daryl! You have really got all sounds to blend together perfectly. Sounds fantastic in my speakers. And these lyrics engage even us living outside of US.

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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/12 19:32:17 (permalink)
    kevinwal
    Very cool song! Have no fear, the republic has withstood a lot worse than this, and if you start feeling down, just write another one just like this. It's impossible to be anything but cheery with this tune playing. My wife says if you add a bunch of reverb you've got a perfect 80's dance tune. 




    Cheers Kevin - maybe I'll do an 80's remix with reverb on the Master buss :)
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/13 06:02:21 (permalink)
    Hi. Easy to listen to, and catchy song. Liked the lyrics. Sounds very good.
    All the best.

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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/13 11:33:03 (permalink)
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    Liking the vibe a lot! Nice post new-wave feel and super clear production! Nice job.




    Thank you very much Paul
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/13 21:24:31 (permalink)
    kennywtelejazz
    This song & message is very good Daryl  it's times like these I wish I sang and wrote lyrics …
    Very inventive , super easy to listen too . Your tune also has a nice toe tapper vibe …
    On a side note , while my toes were a tapping , I noticed that my middle finger got into the act and decided to pay homage to the main characters you had written the song about 
     
    all the best,
     
    Kenny


    Lol. More power to your middle finger!
    Thanks Kenny
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    Re: Election Rejection (damned if I do) - a new original song 2016/04/14 13:27:01 (permalink)
    eph221
    Has a post-new wave feel.  :D


    I was going for a pre-old thumbs up :)

    Thanks for the listen
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