Thalweg, yeah, I'm in agreement on the percussion. it needs to come up just a bit. Thanks for listening.

Larry, a different direction for me, for sure, and I have really enjoyed working(playing) on this one.
I have been listening to it with all of the suggestions in mind, and I think I have some ideas for expanding this some.
It felt really good to finally upload a new song....it's been way to long.
Best wishes for your son, and I hope he returns home safely.

Daylaa, I also think it wants to be bigger, and I am going to see what I can do to plump it up. Thanks.

Thanks Lynn. I always struggle with whether or not to add more, but I think this one still has room.
And I'll definitely keep playing. This stuff gets in your blood, and you can never really stop.

Reece, Thanks. Plenty of good suggestions from everybody. I'm off today, and am going to see what I can do.
You know I tend toward somewhat minimal mixes, but I am going to see just how far i can go with this, and keep weaving more texture into it.
We'll see what happens.

I can't say much more than what'sw already been said.   Excellent job!   From the playing, the arrangement and recording.