Hey.  Thanks for posting comments on my tune!  As promised, here I am to return the favour. 
 
Wow.  Love this!  Nice guitar tone on the lead.  Gotta be a Fender....
 
The piece is eclectic, surely.  The weird voice channel interspersed throughout the work is obviously not someone who's left on the studio mic while talking on the phone, right?  (kidding...).  I don't know if there's a bit too much of it at times.
 
That lead guitar is nice and up front and centre.  The chops and the playing - enviable!  Nicely done!  I hear the delay hammer out to the right a bit more than to the left.  I found that happens with some of the presets on vst-delay and it drives me bonkers.  I have to tweak and tweak 'til I get the delay fanning out just perfect. 
 
The percussion section is stellar! 
 
Love the bass guitar - just perfect in every way! 
 
Would love to hear the big POOF of a kick as the piece progresses (just on every other beat-1's, maybe?), but that's a taste thing. 
 
The vocalist.  Knows the chops real good!  Is she in a tight room or is that the type of reverb you're going for?  I just think her voice - though great, is 'outside' of the recording, as if it didn't sonically belong.  The reverb that your guitar is using - THAT's the one that should be (at least in part) be treating her voice. 
 
Love the organ lines - would love to hear it 'leslie-i-fied' on-and-off like throughout - again a taste thing.  I think, now that I hear it, it's the organ that is hiding up the left-most delay of the lead-guitar.  Just play more with that delay.
 
Hope all of this is encouraging and not to 'critique-y'.  I really do love the work.  Congrats!  Sounds like you have found a great groove for yourself.  Keep up the great work!
 
Martin Barret
 
 

Vechung-  We thank you for listening and for the nice comments!

Janet- It's always a beautiful day when we're able to sit and listen to music, WITH A NICE CUP 'O' JOE!! Thanks for listening.

A mean harmonica!  (More please!)

What an awesome hybrid of fun-stuff going on here (inside my K701 cans).

Ambience-candy reminds me a bit of Philz's outlandishness ... which takes this up a notch.
 
And bkg (female) vox is an awesome spacey touch.

Totally agree with Warren - It is a beautiful world, made doubly so by this music. Smoky, moody, lyrical and sweet. Just how I like my coffee! Great work.

I really dig this Pug pearl. that hammond sounds sweet in the back as does that signature warm Warren bass playing. I did find the intermittent talking distracting but not so much it took away from the beauty of the song.