Somethin Just Aint Right

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Re:Somethin Just Aint Right 2012/01/24 14:02:49 (permalink)
Nice.
That reminds me, I need to reply to that letter I got from my rich uncle in Madagascar.

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Re:Somethin Just Aint Right 2012/01/24 14:51:40 (permalink)
Hi Daryl...love the song and the smoothness and cohesion of all of the elements!  The first technical impression I had was the perceived lack of cymbals.  On occasion, the 16th notes done on the hi-hat would pop out (like at 1:27), I would think 'oh, there they are'...then they disappeared back into the depths.  I didn't really hear any cymbal hits (maybe there aren't any, which is ok), but the hats seemed to have gotten lost as well (other than the 16th notes in those couple of sections, but especially with the vocals going).  I feel if they are brought up just a tad in the mix, they will add a little 'sparkle' to the song, without taking away any of the smoothness of the vocals and guitar tones.  Maybe set the HH level like at 1:27, or better yet, raise them just a tad, and lower the parts similar to 1:27 so they are more consistent in volume throughout the entire song.  Just my $.02 worth, nice job!

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Re:Somethin Just Aint Right 2012/01/25 22:03:31 (permalink)
Cliff -  I didn't do any professional tests on my room, I just put up about $400 of studio foam, on all the open spaces.  I could hear the difference immediatley.  If your talking as you walk in my studio now, you can hear the sound quiet right down.  Pretty cool and it was also immediatly noticable on anything being mic'ed.

Steve, Robert  - Thank you for the listen, glad you liked it.

Jeff -  You're new so I will let you in on my hearing problem.  I have a hell of a time hearing cymbals and when I get them up to where I can hear them... they're too loud.  I struggle with that and tend to err on them being too quiet as that tends to be less offensive.  You're no doubt dead right and thanks for letting me know.  My other problem is I have no concept of being a drummer, I spent too many years just leaving it up to the drummer and never really seriously considered the nuances, that was a mistake that I'm now paying for.   I need to find a drummer who will work cheap.

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Re:Somethin Just Aint Right 2012/01/26 00:33:38 (permalink)
The guitar captured my attention on this one. A really nice tone and smooth fluid playing

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Re:Somethin Just Aint Right 2012/01/26 09:34:24 (permalink)
Definitely one of your best Daryl, just excellent. You've probably had enough comparisons in one thread, but I got a Robben Ford vibe from this.

 
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Re:Somethin Just Aint Right 2012/01/27 12:57:39 (permalink)
This is a really well done bit of tunage!

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Re:Somethin Just Aint Right 2012/01/27 19:06:18 (permalink)
Hi Daryl , WOW man your sounding really good on this song
 this is the best I've ever heard you
great writing , tasty  singing , nice groove, very good  guitar playing & tone w such understated restraint & taste ,
I really dug that harmonized end of the guitar solo ,
you did  real nice mix on this song
that's the good news
now for the funky news
I did hear something that wasn't quite right & well,  i just can't seem to put my finger on it
I'm thinking it might be that Carr amp your playing your guitar out of
I would be happy to look at it and diagnose it for you

Kenny


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Re:Somethin Just Aint Right 2012/01/28 21:34:28 (permalink)
Thal, James, Robert - Thanks so much.  Glad you liked it.

Kenny,  Gosh Kenny, would you really keep my amp for awhile and check it out for me [:D}

I thought for several years that the Mercury would be an amp I would own someday, but I finally couldn't wait for someday.   You would love my Carr.  Thanks for the listen.  Check out some of my stuff I posted since you were around last there are some tunes up your alley.

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