Wow, now that's cool, as are all your songs.  :) 

WoW!!! This is great! Was that a vocoder you used on your vox? I thought the guitar solo was mighty fine too. Not sure what Frank was hearing, but sounded great to my ears.

no way... well maybe...

I like it.

timidi


Thank you Vicente. 

Hey Mike. That's kind of you. Thanks. If you don't mind, would you  enlighten me as to what the storyline is?? I don't think I got to where I was trying to go.

Good ear thatastrat. It may be off key. And, I noticed it, but went with it anyway for the tension I think. Lionel Ritchie???? Ok, That would be fine by me:)

Thanks paulo. Just listen, find in your head what you want and go for it, and trim the fat. Ususally works pretty good.

Thanks janet. Appreciate it..

I guess to me its one of those songs that people can relate to (which makes it good) in their own ways.  Whether its a material thing, emotion, relationship, etc...  one just takes away from the song how it relates to them.   Kind of leaving it open to the listeners interpretation and how they pull from it to make it their own story.


This is kinda what I was getting at as a story line LOL.   If it was unfinished or not knowing where you were going with it, I can tell ya it worked for me and I loved it  


Does that clear up what I was getting at?  


Sorry it took a while to get back to ya

 one just takes away from the song how it relates to them.   Kind of leaving it open to the listeners interpretation and how they pull from it to make it their own story.

Thanks Michael. Yea, I get wrapped up in the anal-ness of lyric writing (in everything actually). Cause, as one writes, it's hard to separate one's own vision/story/picture into something randomly vague that can appeal to others on the level you described. Thanks for that. And for validating the concept. I couldn't have said it better (as you may have noticed:).