Daniel. I actually like this version better than the original. I like what you did with it. Really cool. If I were held down and forced to make a crit of any kind I would only say I would pick the tempo up just slightly.

 
Hi alkie, gtrpastor, Starise, Wallenstein Studios,
Thank you for your feedback!
 
alkie,  I'm glad you dig the groove!
 
Starise, Happy to hear you like this version! ...speaking of groove (tempo), I know this tempo is on the edge of standing still. I personally think what the tune is missing is live drumming where a drummer would play laid back or slightly before the beat when necessary so it becomes a little less static. (...Very hard to program this)  
 
gtrpastor, Thank's for your comment, specially about the build up ...I wasn't sure if I was overdoing it arrangement wise, but it seems to work this way : ) 
 
Walt, this is a great compliment from you, thank you so much! I don't really have a vocal technic, just squeezing it out, so I feel pretty flattered here...
 
Oh yeah, one more thing:  ...better?  ...I'd say different...
 
Once  again, thnx Gentlemen for listening and commenting!
 
All the best!