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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/17 13:38:21 (permalink) ☄ Helpfulby Lynn 2014/01/19 17:27:07
Would it upset you if I said can I have a bit more kick?
 
Thanks for sharing and on mix 4

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/17 13:44:38 (permalink)
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Would it upset you if I said can I have a bit more kick?
 
Thanks for sharing and on mix 4


Not at all, Wookie.  Give me a few minutes.
 
Ahh...here it is, mix 5: http://www.soundclick.com...ngid=12649391&q=hi
 
post edited by Lynn - 2014/01/17 14:15:58

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/17 17:24:24 (permalink)
I love this!!  I love the bass line.  And the marimba/xylophone thing is awesome.  Wow, this is really pro.  Nice stuff!!
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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/17 20:32:45 (permalink)
Hey Lynn,

I listen to this one the last couple of nights while I walk the big yellow dog. I may have commented last time you posted this one, but for me it has a real Joe Walsh feel to it. I like it a lot, lots of stuff going on, fun song. I can't say much about the mix, at least nothing you'd want to go by from an iPhone. I like the bass riff and the tone of the guitar tracks they sound great. Overall this is one of my favorites that you have recorded.

Thank goodness for voice recognition texting, I can actually, comment while on the walk with the big yellow dog.
post edited by MakeShift - 2014/01/17 20:34:29

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/18 13:44:17 (permalink)
@ ralphwiggum-Don, I appreciate your kind words and time!
 
@ MakeShift-Mike, thanks so much for your input.  My new tablet has now become part of my mixing platform, which means I'm mixing for smaller and smaller speakers all the time.  It's tricky!

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/19 11:19:04 (permalink)
Lynn sorry for the delay in replying following my request I had to go do evening meal.
 
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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/20 12:32:27 (permalink)
Wookie, thanks for staying with this.  You are so right!  I took this for a spin in my car, yesterday, and I immediately realized that the sound filled up the area better than ever before.  It makes me wonder how I missed that before, but that's why I come here for help.  Thanks to all!

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/20 14:30:55 (permalink)
Really Cool Tune Lynn, It comes over a little distorted on my set-up but that may have been intended as a little dirty mix.


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reckon the number of the beast.....
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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/21 15:10:15 (permalink)
Hi Alan, it was not meant to be distorted, and does not come across that way on my system.  I do master my songs to be approximately as loud as commercial releases but keep the headroom at -3.5 db with light limiting.  I appreciate you taking the time to comment and bringing this to my attention.  I love your vocal covers.

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/21 15:47:24 (permalink)
Great song Lynn.  It's a wild ride, and will make a super end to your compilation.
 
I want to mention that I think the bass guitar is perhaps a bit TOO prominent in the mid frequencies (sounds kinda "nasal" to me).  A lot of the bass riffs sound like low pitched guitar leads and not BASS.  IMHO you might want to consider separating the bass and guitar frequency ranges from each other a bit more so they don't compete as much.

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/21 16:05:11 (permalink)
Hi Walt, I appreciate your comments on this.  I hadn't thought of that perspective, as I was mainly going for a "classic" Fender sound.  Since this is the kind of advice that I look for, I will consider that on the next evaluation.  Sounds like a quick adjustment.  I was looking for a Tony Levin approach, but I don't know if I got anywhere near that level.

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/21 16:43:56 (permalink)
I really like this song Lynn! Very cool tune. The mix sounds fine to me...It all comes down to what you like at this point. I don't hear anything that leeps out as needing fixed. Congrats on the finished work. It always feels good to end one and start something new.

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/22 00:38:40 (permalink)
I'm digging the remix Lynn. Good job. The vox are pretty far up-front? Maybe a tiny bit too much? 

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/22 15:42:41 (permalink)
Lynn,
Nice job all around.  I would leave mix 5 alone and call it a day.  Sounds good on my PC here at work.  I can hear all the instruments really well.

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/22 20:51:25 (permalink)
Hi Lynn.  Nice sounds to this one.  You have some great guitar work going on here.  Your vocals are very well done and really accent the lyrics.  Nice one.
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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/22 22:30:43 (permalink)
Great stuff Lynn - BV's and marimba are my bestest bits -  good luck with the CD.
Now on 2nd listen - brill mate
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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/22 22:51:29 (permalink)
Lynn-
a most excellent opus. love the vocal harmony and vox treatment in general-
the whole feel here conjures up a Peter Gabriel sound reminiscent of his 'Sledgehmer' days -
crunchy Strats twang nicely -
Definite foot tapping immediately with groove firmly established.
nice work - this is something I'd definitely buy and listen to :)

very cool!!

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/01/23 13:38:40 (permalink)
Clint - thanks for your kind words and encouragement.  I think I'll sit on this for a while.
 
Robbie - thanks for listening again.  I've learned that when I play a commercial CD in my car while driving on the highway, most things drop out of a mix except drums, bass, and vocals.  Thus, I mix that way, now days.
 
Jimmy - thanks for listening and your comments.  I'll take your advice.
 
Freddy - thanks for taking the time!  I must get to work on my British pop, now.
 
Daryl - I appreciate you taking the time to listen twice.  I'm glad you like the marimba because when I posted this a few years ago, people were suggesting I drop them.  I just couldn't bear to do that.
 
Daren - you've uncovered my muse!  PG has long been an influence on me.  And, please, keep posting your throwaway songs.  I love em.
 
 

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/02/14 14:44:01 (permalink)
nice song and sounds.. completely well done track


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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/02/14 14:45:52 (permalink)
Thank you, Makke.  It's good to hear from you.

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/02/16 20:21:32 (permalink)
Hi "Lynn"
I can't listen to your songs. There is a problem in the link.. ?
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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/02/16 20:44:30 (permalink)

All the best,
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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/02/17 14:09:30 (permalink)
what a nice snarky vibe!
dig it!
love all the little parts that add up, left and right...
i'd love to hear the kick and the bass guitar louder.
maybe a bit of the higher mids taken out of the bass, and then more level.
 

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/02/17 14:23:21 (permalink)
I love this song Lynn! Nice separation of the guitar parts, and I really like the vocal harmonies you chose. It's got a great groove to it too, with that infectious bass line. Your last mix sounded good to my ears. Nice job!
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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/02/18 08:32:32 (permalink)
Lynn
Nihat, try this link and see if it works: http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12649391&q=hi&newref=1
 
 




wonderful. I can not find words to comment it's very nice with everything
 
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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/02/18 12:14:16 (permalink)
 @ Batsbrew - thanks for taking a listen.  You got the snarkiness that I was feeling when I wrote this.  Your comments about the bass drum and guitar sounds like good advice to me.  I'll fire it up and give it a listen per your suggestions.
 
@ Leadfoot - thank you for your kind words and time.  It makes me feel that I'm close.
 
@ Grup Gezgin - I'm glad this link worked for you.  Thank you for taking the time to listen and you comments.  Keep putting out the great music you're known for.

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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/02/19 20:59:23 (permalink)
Hey Lynn I like the sound , like said before has a cool crunchy sound to it with nice changes going on in there too .
Super , nice job creating and mixing this one !
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Re: Don't Take My Dreams Away 2014/02/20 16:44:00 (permalink)
James, thanks for listening and taking the time to comment.  May you keep on keepin' on.

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