Thanks for the comments!
 
VLV, I can't sing to save my life so I just found a way to sort of make it work. I wrote out a melody but again, I can't sing. The third section, in my opinion, would have been better served with someone adept to rapping even though it's not fast like rapping.
 
I appreciate your comment about the guitar harmonies at the end. Sorry about my vocals. I meant Loch ness but made a typo and it just stuck. I was thinking of changing the name to Chthonic. Chthonic is the monster that lurks in hell and is awaiting his chance to reek havoc. In this case he is, at the first section.  I'll probably leave it at Lochness though.

Thanks for listening and the nice comment. I appreciate it very much. I went and checked out "Mull of Kintyre". I never heard of it before but saw a Paul McCartney and Wings video on Youtube. Cool song!