I have no issues except a slight de-tuning effect at the beginning.  I think a little more bottom end of the vocals would be good, you've got a good voice for this genre.   Some cool little things on the bass there.  Rockin' lead break dude.  I would opt for either a fade out or fast run up to a solid cut off on the ending... but that's me.  Sounds very good.

Daryl

CreatingNoise:
 
 
Hey, Tony,
 
 
How's it going, brother?  It's really great to hear from you!
 
Thanks so much for checking this out for me and for your very encouraging comments!
 
I'm planning to do a little minor tweaking and post the remix soon.  I always look forward to and greatly appreciate your input because your Distant Towers stuff always sounds top notch!
 
I'm looking forward to hearing some stuff from your upcoming fourth DT CD soon!
 
Thanks again, Tony, and please tell Tom I said hello!
Bob
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Serious_Noise!:
 
 
Hey, Bobby,
 
 
Thanks, buddy, I really appreciate you giving this song a listen, and also your very kind words!
 
I'm still using Sonar PE 8.5 and Line 6 POD Farm 2.55 to record, although I'm still thinking about making the upgrade to X2 sometime in the future, when all the X2 bugs are worked out.
 
You've been posting some dynamite rockers lately, Bobby, very nice work, keep 'em coming!
 
Thanks again, and have a good one!
Bob
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CLEAN:
 
 
Hey, Mark,
 
Thank a lot, buddy, I appreciate you taking time to check it out and your kind comments!  I always look forward to your input and value it highly.
 
Your latest Pugtones post with Warren is excellent, good stuff!
 
Thanks again, Mark, I'm grateful that you like the song and appreciate your support!
Bob
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Hi there Bob

I love this my friend
 
Your vocals are excellent and the guitar playing sublime.
 
Rock on!

darylcrowley:
 
 
Hi, Daryl,
 
How are you, buddy?  Hope you're having a rockin' weekend!
 
Thanks very much for checking this song out for me, and for your good input and words of encouragement!
 
Yes, Sir, I was experimenting a little bit with a new piece of gear and my gain staging suffered a bit, and still needs a little bit of tweaking.  I'm hoping to finally be able to get back to this for some EQ and mix adjustments in the next few days, and will post the remix soon.
 
Thanks again, Daryl, have a good one!
Bob
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kennywtelejazz:
 
 
 
Hey, Kenny,
 
How's it going, brother?  Hope you're doing great!
 
Thanks so much for giving this "quickie" a listen for me, and for your good input, observations, and very kind words!
 
I really appreciate you taking time to check it out and comment, and your opinion means a great deal to me.
 
Your latest video post was truly smokin' hot with dynamite playing throughout, great stuff, Kenny!
 
Thanks again, buddy, and have a rockin' weekend!
Bob
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Very powerful sounding production - drums are the best sounding I think I have heard from you. Great job overall.
 
 Any crits ? Well, I would maybe introduce something over the intro after a couple of bars - maybe just some high pitch feedback, noise type of thing (technical guitar terms there !) as it feels a tad long as is and on the last "frenzy" of the choruses I would suggest some adding some delay so it carries over a little where the rest drops down.

NOTE:  Remix Uploaded 5/17/13 after finally getting to get back in the studio!  Thanks to everyone for your input, advice and ideas!
 
For the remix I swept out a lot of mud from the rhythm guitars, went back to my original bass guitar EQ setup from my first CD, ramped up the drone guitar intro with a short fade in, took Paulo's suggestion about introducing a short feedback type blast over the intro, and cleaned up a couple of the drum fills.  I'm hoping the overall volume levels are okay, and that it translates a bit better on most systems.  Let me know what you think.
 
 
 
Very sorry for the late replies.  For the past two months I've been extremely busy at work, but hopefully I'll be able to get back on here more often soon!
 
 
 
THE NIGHT FOX:
 
 
 
Hi, James,
 
 
Thanks a lot, buddy!  I really appreciate you checking this out for me, and your very encouraging comments.  I’m really glad that you like it, and hope you’re doing well with your new guitar.
 
Have a great night, James!
Bob
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SteveStrummerUK:
 
 
 
Hey, Steve,
 
 
How’s my metal head brother from another mother?  Hope you’re doing great with your new Line 6 Valve amp, very cool piece of gear!
 
Thanks so much for giving a listen to this little, two hour quickie that I kind of threw together in a rare fit of rage after I had a particularly crazy and frustrating week!  LOL, I guess sometimes raw emotion can be converted into some kind of “artistic” expression!
 
I really appreciate you taking time to check it out, and always value your input, opinion and friendship very highly!
 
Best wishes
Bob
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timidi:
 
 
Hey, Tim,
 
How are you, buddy?  Hope you're doing great!
 
Thank you for lending your valuable ears to this one for me, and for your good ideas and kind words!
 
I really appreciate your input and good instincts!
 
Have a great weekend, Tim!
Bob
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Paulo:
 
 
Hey, Paulo,
 
Many thanks brother, I really appreciate you giving this a listen and also your good input and ideas!
 
On this new remix, I used your suggestion about introducing something different into the intro, and also faded in the opening drone guitar.
 
Thanks again, Paulo, I always look forward to and greatly appreciate your input.  Best wishes!
Bob
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Dude Ivy:
 
 
 
Hey, Dude,
 
Thanks so much for coming back for seconds, man, you made my day, brother!
 
It's comments like yours that make the frustrating part of recording and mixing all worthwhile, and also make this such a great place!
 
I really appreciate your encouraging comments, input and support.
 
Have a rockin' weekend, buddy!
Bob
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Paulo:
 
 
Hey, Paulo,
 
LOL, I actually did give you (and all my Songs Forum buddies) a big thank-you shout out in the liner notes of my "Face The Fire" CD, for all the great help, input, observations and suggestions that everyone provides here on the forum.
 
Thanks again, brother, have a good one!
Bob
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I like the new mix, I would like to hear more definition on the bass, maybe cut a notch out of the rhythm guitars, and or maybe boost a bit of the high mids on that bass? But keep in mind? That's coming from a bass player :-) So I tend to focus on the bass? Others may hear things differently.