Lovely song. Very nicely done.
 
Regards,
Kane

Rimshot
I really like your style. This production is so good. Love the song and mix. 
On my system, running it through speakers and my ATH M50's, I think the bass is too hot. 
Love the kick level. I think the bass is overpowering the vocals. 
 
Isn't it funny how we all hear stuff differently? 
 
All the best, 
Rimshot

Thanks a lot Jimmy - very nice of you.
I'll take another look at that bass.

jamesg1213
Good song Daryl, spot on message too. Mix sounds good to me, listening fairly low in headphones.

Cheers James

kakku

daryl1968

kakku

dcumpian
Nice one Daryl! Drums are very present in this, which I love. Bass is right there (not sure why Kakku is missing it, it's right behind my eyes). Nice touches throughout which really keep things interesting.

Regards,
Dan

I do hear the bass I just want to hear it like darker or deeper. My tunes most of them miss good bass but I do like the bass,

I will do a drum and bass mix for you Kakku :) 

That would BE nice but perhaps best IF you use your talent for something else but I will try to put deep bass on my own tunes, which I have had problems with.

Ha fair enough mate

Mesh

daryl1968

Mesh
Good song Daryl and well done on all the instrumentation/performances. You mixes are very good and I love the amount of clarity you bring out. Personally, I'd like to hear the bass a bit more prominent, but doesn't take anything away from he song. Well done!! Keep up the good work and keep churning them out mate. :)   

Thanks mate - you're the best.
How is the studying going?

Not as well as I wanted to Daryl.....I failed the 6 hr. exam. No worries.....will have to redouble my efforts and do a better job on the next take.
BTW, if you do have any need for a little noodling or soloing on a track, I'd love to contribute.....(I remember you mentioned something like this back in Dec..).

bugger :( when do you get to retake?
Yes - definitely do something soon

Excellent song mate.
 
Bass tone needs some work.

rbecker
This is a very, very catchy tune. The kind that stays in your head and you hum at 2:00 in the morning. I like it a lot.
A couple things:
1. I would be interested to hear this with different basses. Nothing wrong with the current version, but just to compare.
2. To build a little expectation for the listener, It might be interesting to not bring the bass in until about 35 seconds into the tune, or maybe have it play the first 15 seconds (intro),  drop out, and then back in at 35. This is just a stylistic thing, not a critique. Great song!

Thanks for the compliments and suggestions - I really appreciate it.
Sorry for disrupting your night's sleep :)

stevec
Catchy, well played and arranged, and the mix is crystal clear.   Sounds like Daryl to me. 
 

Thanks Steve - very nice of you mate

Fantastic song, Daryl! You have surpassed yourself in this mix, everything sounds so clear and fits in the mix perfectly. And as usual I'm jealous of your ability to make few sounds to sound so much. Great job, this one was really fun to hear!

Wookiee
If the honk was intendead then I for one Am all for artistic honks .  As I said only a tiny little insignificant nit.

I like a good honk :)

audiomyth
Lovely song. Very nicely done.
 
Regards,
Kane

Thanks Kane - how have you been? Long time no see.

ABull
Well well done -- this coulda woulda been a hit back in the day when hits were actually melodic 
 
Allan
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Ha - thanks Allan - I think I'll build me a time machine :)

Please help prevent the prevalence of prosaic pastiche.

DIGGIN' this one....
 
it's got a cool vibe to it,
obviously a nod to more straight up pop format,
but i like the sideways moving chord changes
 
nice clean production
i dig the drum sounds
 
almost like a cross between something that pharrell would write, but owl city would re-imagine
 
i can't find much i'd suggest changing,
maybe if you could brighten the bass track a bit, the low end is good,
just seems to need a touch of clarity
 
cool tune, kudos

Great song.... the intro and verses remind me a bit of Supertramp in both style and studio quality.   Very well produced, and great hook.   Don't know if you changed the bass and drums since some of the earlier comments above, but they sound good so wouldn't change them.
 
Regards