Re: I'm Crazy About You -------- A Total Rebuild (thanks for the suggestions)
Thanks for commenting Bjorn.
You are absolutely right and the pronoun confusion is something that I never even considered. I imagine I have made similar mistakes before. Unfortunately, for me, I have never taken a creative writing course. The majority of my courses were in biology, zoology, chemistry, statistics, etc. Those kind of courses teach a different kind of creativity but unfortunately not the kind that applies to doing music. As I am retired and doing music (lyrics) you have planted the seed that perhaps I should take a creative writing course. It certainly couldn't hurt.
Thanks again my friend.