lynn
all i can say is,
GREAT MUSIC FROM A GREAT MUSICIAN.
all the songs that i have heard from you up to know
have always a good structure and vibe.
of course your VOCALS ARE GREAT too.

MUCH RESPECT

PEACE!!!

B36B, thank you for your kind comments.  I'm diggin that we're starting to get a feel for each other.  Keep up your good work, and remember, stay thirsty, my friend.

Lynn, you keep coming up with new stuff.  I agree with Malcomb that the voice could be louder, or more present in some way.  It's a good vocal and should be heard.  As I listened it seemed that it was more present sometimes than others.  Maybe some envelopes.  I don't know buddy, it seems that later in the song the vocal is louder.  That could also be personal ear problems.  LOL.  No matter, this is a really well done and well written song.

Hi Lynn I like this one , the drum & percussion track seems a bit too far back in the mix for my taste . Your vocals I liked and the lyrics I liked as well . I don't know Lynn you seem to be on a created roll yourself nice one I enjoyed it .

Keep'em coming buddy -James 

Now that's cool!  So much going to keep the interest.  I agree that the percussion is really nice.  The bass too.  :)  And vocals, of course.  Great production!  

Janet, thanks for having a listen and your kind comments.  I'm especially pleased you liked the percussion because those parts took longer than all of the others combined, and I programmed them myself.  BTW, I love the new mix you put up for your new song.

Paulo, I'm glad you found this and took the time to comment.  As for the ending, it's growing on me, too, although it could change in a heartbeat if I think of something better.  I can tell you that I've already thought of several endings not nearly as good.  There will be a new mix of this very soon to address the volume of the lead vocal that has been mentioned several times.  So beware.

Hi Pete, I thought you had disappeared.  Welcome back, amigo.  Hopefully, you'll get a new set of ear buds for Christmas (or ears). 

Mark, thanks for having a listen and taking the time to reply.  It's nice to know that my music reaches the home of where it all began for me.

Eric, thanks for the kind words and the listen.  Peace be with you.

Jayhill, thank you for the kind words and for stopping by.  BTW, I'll soon have a new mix of this up which I did in X2 with some of its new goodies.

Thank you, Moe, for the kind words.  I agree about the vocal, and I've already addressed that issue and a few others.  I will be posting a new version of this very soon that I mixed in X2 with a few of their goodies.

Cool song, likes it a lot , great arranging and playing. 

 Funny I have a feeling our systems have different perspectives on the low end, I found it a bit overwhelming and had to turn it down.  I had just listened to a bunch of songs on the forum here, and yours was WAY loud in the low end.  Not complaining but just thought I'd mention that as you thought my song needed more low end. :)
If your playback system is weak in the low end then that explains it. 
My home stereo , which I listen on, is a bass heavy system typical of most. So I find if the bass is overwhelming when played on it, then I need to apply a little hi pass to the mix. This is usually between 65- 95 Hz. 


My Monitors are Yamaha NSM 10 which are well known to lack low end. I have gotten used to the way they should sound and am never far off the mark with mixes. 
The other possibility is you have applied a massive dose of Boost 11 :} 

Hi there Lynn
 
Cool song, awesome production - this sounds really 'big'
 

WOW, now it sounds even more like a Peter Gabriel song!.  Very nice Lynn!. Thanks for sharing!. I will eventually (tm) get the re-mix of Why I'm still here done. Had a bad week of sleepless nights, and 3am postings etc..

Tony, thanks for your time.  I look forward to hearing your next posting.

Daryl, it's always good to hear from you.  Thanks for listening again.