Venus
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MEGABOMB
Dance pop meets rock? It was hard to place this genre. Whatcha think? Production and whatever crits would be loved..... "love me like your MEGABOMB"-----> http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11251209 Stratton/Maynard
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Jonbouy
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It's kinda reminding me of something like Goldfrapp meets early No Doubt.
There some nice diversions in there to keep it an interesting song. No crits here on the mix at all. Nicely put together and very radio friendly.
Plenty of commercial appeal here I like it.
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derFunkenstein
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Great. Now I'm going to be singing this one the remainder of my day. Cool song.
DANCE!
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Venus
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JonB, that's a crazy coincidence, I love Goldfrapp! A boy that I had a crush on in elementary school is now a dentist in NYC and bought the whole album on itunes and forwarded it to me cuz he thought I would like it. If you haven't seen the video for "ROCKET," you've gotta see it! All that duct tape is awesome! I posted it to my facebook two summers ago and it became my theme song thru my divorce! Was that TMI? Oh well.
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Venus
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derFunkenstein
Great. Now I'm going to be singing this one the remainder of my day. Cool song.
DANCE!
"LIKE!" and Thumbs up!
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bandontherun19
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This was really, really good... A pro sounding pop song.
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I listened earlier at the office on crappy speakers and things sounded good. I wanted to listen again at home on the good system but the file won't load for me at all. Edit: ok, got it to play. This sounds very good a decent system. Great song and mix.
post edited by marcos69 - 2011/11/28 20:19:46
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Rimshot
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Sounds really good through my Koss Pro35A phones and my really small Altec Lansing computer speakers. Nice song and great mix!
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Janet
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Great job, Venus! You sound so confident and the whole thing just sounds great! :)
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Good tune.... sounded good on my nice buds....
For the little that I know about GaGa... sounds like something she might do.
production is good.
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Really cool stuff. I like how everything flows from section to the next and loved every bit!
Well done!
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drumstixkev
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Hey Dena, EXCELLENT tune! Very catchy song and I agree with Jon, radio friendly. Love the riffs and the tone of the guitar. Your vocal performance/pitch WOW... spot on. Very pro sounding mix on my end but I would probably add a PINCH more low end. That would bring the bass and kick out more and give the mix a touch more depth. Then again I'm the only one hearing this and maybe my home system/ears suck. One thing I'm sure is that the song/performance/mix are KILLER! Kev
post edited by drumstixkev - 2011/11/28 22:11:43
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Scottytunes
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Me and my Sony ear buds are loving this! Great song, performances and mix!
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Venus
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bandontherun19
This was really, really good... A pro sounding pop song.
Thanks! Strattdaddy will be stoked to hear that!
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Venus
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marcos69
I listened earlier at the office on crappy speakers and things sounded good. I wanted to listen again at home on the good system but the file won't load for me at all.
Edit: ok, got it to play. This sounds very good a decent system. Great song and mix.
I thought it sounded good thru my laptop too and then hook it up thru headphones and its like a whole other song. Cool!
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Venus
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Rimshot
Sounds really good through my Koss Pro35A phones and my really small Altec Lansing computer speakers. Nice song and great mix!
Thanks, I will tell Will.
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Venus
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Janet
Great job, Venus! You sound so confident and the whole thing just sounds great! :)
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Venus
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Guitarhacker
Good tune.... sounded good on my nice buds....
For the little that I know about GaGa... sounds like something she might do.
production is good.
I thought the "dance" lines reminded me of gaga too. She rocks!
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jamesyoyo
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Great tune, good energy, and I like the choices you guys have made here.
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Venus
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Guitarpima
Really cool stuff. I like how everything flows from section to the next and loved every bit!
Well done!
Took us a coupla mixes to get structure down, in the end, Will did a good job.
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Venus
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drumstixkev
Hey Dena,
EXCELLENT tune! Very catchy song and I agree with Jon, radio friendly. Love the riffs and the tone of the guitar. Your vocal performance/pitch WOW... spot on. Very pro sounding mix on my end but I would probably add a PINCH more low end. That would bring the bass and kick out more and give the mix a touch more depth.
Then again I'm the only one hearing this and maybe my home system/ears suck. One thing I'm sure is that the song/performance/mix are KILLER!
Kev
Awe Kev, thank you so much! That means a lot and I will forward your suggs to Will!
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Venus, Very tight and slick production and catchy hook. It does sound ready for the mainstream.
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evadianepug
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Song came out good, Dena and Will. It could just be me but it seems a bit mushy on the low end. I have an ear infection so it could be that. Nice job, you guys.
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Bob Oister
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Hi, Dena,
Oh, yeah, that's the ticket, punchy dance rock with great vocals and guitar over a driving backbeat!
Really well written and performed, and a clean, radio-ready mix to boot. It reminds me of some of the stuff the house DJs played in the after hours clubs after my metal cover band finished for the night. We'd quit at 2 or 3 in the morning and then they would lock the doors and the places would stay open to party until 5 or 6 am. Good times!!! 
You and Will did a killer job on this! Bob
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Venus
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Scottytunes
Me and my Sony ear buds are loving this! Great song, performances and mix!
Thank you for listening!
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Venus
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SeriousNoise
Excellent!!!!!!!!! Not my genre of music so all I can say is it sounds great to me!!! You've got it going on no doubt with this type of music. I found myself tapping my fingers with the drum beats and wanting to dance, TRUST ME WHEN I SAY THIS : "I DO NOT DANCE AND NEVER WILL, EVER!", I hate dancing!
Although I can hear and see others going nuts in a club on this tune, this was PERFECT IMO!!! If anything I said seemed to have a bad crit that was not my intent, I'm just sayin' I enjoyed this very much but it's not my type of music that I normally listen to.
AWESOME!!!!! YOU GO GIRL!!!!!
Bobby
I gotcha! I'm thinkin Will truly appreciates a crit like this.
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Venus
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jamesyoyo
Great tune, good energy, and I like the choices you guys have made here.
You're my absolute crit guy! I can't believe it! Yay!
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Venus
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evadianepug
Song came out good, Dena and Will. It could just be me but it seems a bit mushy on the low end. I have an ear infection so it could be that. Nice job, you guys.
I think it might be the Sennheisers that actually boost bass so it wasn't as heavy on the laptop but it was pumped up enough on my ipod earplugs so we're "calling it."
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