Rainfall re recorded

Forgot to post the link,it's there now.
 

Excellent!  Great job Teego.  Love your voice.  The song is great.  It sounds radio ready.  
One small technical point is that your mix is pretty much mono.  There is not a general stereo width to it but it sounds great anyway.  Just thought you should know.  
 
Happy Easter!
 
Rimshot
 

Great Kountry tune... Mama? Your dog? Tough times? (Rain fall) Really good stuff, and well performed. The vocals are "perfect" The harmony, very nice. Now for the improvements ;-) You need a drummer? Or someone who can program drums? You can't take a great song like this and leave a drum machine going in the background... It could be so much better with just a little more thought put in to that drum track? Some fills, some places where you're on the ride instead of the hats? Little accents, etc... Not only the performance, but "the sound" of the drums. Drums are very important to the overall vibe, and the overall sound of the mix. How they are spread, how they are treated, the transients, the verb, the overheads, the direct mics, how much each is allowed to ring, etc.. As a guitar player (/keyboard/bass/mandolin/etc... player) I know the drums are a biotch...
 
I know it's hard? I hate thinking about the f'ing drums... I hate it! But this is really a good song, but it feels like the drums are holding it back :-(

teego , hey man you sound fantastic …
I like the mix the way you posted it ….your song sounds powerful 
 
u tube has a way of screwing up in their conversion process anything that even approaches a real decent stereo mix 
it happened to my vid that you saw …what I posted sound wise at CD quality and how it sounds up there are 2 different stories  
theres a poster here on this forum that recommends  putting up close to mono at - 6 db's 
out of every u tube video I've ever seen to this day , his video stands as the best one I've ever heard on u tube 
I'm gonna have to try it his way next time out  like i said your video sounded very good 
 
your voice , guitars , the overall sound was top shelf ….the drums detracted a little bit but hey 
you sound Pro in all the places it really counts ….
great job ….it was nice to see your horse make a cameo 
 
Kenny

Nice work teego, really got a sense of the song from the video. Wishing I could pick some of that rain up and bring to this drought area I'm in right now.

Very nicely done for this short little video. I thought everything sounded just right for it and it was easy to listen to, as well. Good stuff and nice vocals.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Hey man, that's a fantastic song in all respects.  When the chorus started I was hooked for good.  You got some advice on the mix, and others are better at that than me, but if you do remix, please post it.
 
I know the chances of getting a song cut are slim, but this one ought to be.  Beautiful tune, natural flowing lyrics.  What a gem.

Some very nice lyrics and a great tune with it.  Nice performance, too.  

I'd like to point out that several others were commented on based on their names? I was commented on as "man?" :-) It's "Robby? Rockin Robby!" I say this only to bounce the post? Not for self aggrandizement. 

Double post

teego
Thanks rebel007! We are just coming out of about 10 yrs of drought,it went from one extreme to the other. But Hey that is Florida weather! Thanks for the comments..

Where in Florida?  I was a Cocoa High  guy.  Class of 59!  Actually I moved to Orlando last half of my senior year and graduated from Edgewater High.  Graduated from the UF-Gainesville.  Wow! Has that campus changed? 
 
As to your tunes, I really think you need to promote the heck out of your stuff ...  Rainfall and Charlie being  the only two that I've listened to so far. I'm certainly no country music expert, or music expert of any genre for that matter; but, the words,  the melodies and  the emotions you put into your songs are as good as I've ever heard!  Have you  tried to touch base with anybody to help promote the music?

 
Agreed with above comment too. stick it in a wider stereo and put some time into the drums, give them a bit more interest.
Superb singing and feel to your vox. How you annunciate the words works very well. I like the soft tones that you add to it. :)
Nice one!
 

Thanks Gus and Scotty ! I will definitely go back and do  a better job on the drums at some point and remix this, thanks Gus for the suggestions. Scotty, I will check the reverb out as well on the vocal. Thanks !!

Tis nice. From memory this one sounds wider. You should keep the other link up so we can compare. :)

very good stuff teego!  I agree that the drums could use a big face lift.  other than that I think you've done a stellar job on this!