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2012/09/07 22:15:24 (permalink)

Shadow of the Moon, new mix 9/9

Well, after many, many months of too much work, too little time and no inspiration, one of my piano students played the opening riff to this, said she couldn't finish it and said I could (and she only wants a 10% cut!) :)  It took me several weeks to come up with this and a few more weeks to get it done (no 80 minute masterpieces for me!)  :)  Rik agreed to play along (and had it back to me in a couple hours!), so that sweetened the deal and helped the piano solo not be as boring as it could have been.  

Comments and crits welcome, as always. Thanks, guys!  

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New mix with better panning, way less panning on the synth, better eq'ing and more reverb, taking several pieces of advice and hopefully not making it worse.  Thank you, guys!   


9/9:  different eq and reverb
post edited by Janet - 2012/09/09 21:30:36
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    The Band19
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/07 22:30:14 (permalink)
    Very nice Janet. On my buds, the piano may could be a bit brighter? Or maybe "excited?" I know you have Ozone, have you ever tried to use it "on a track?? or a bus? Like your piano? And then for example, just use the exciter? Of course it has a great limiter/mband compressor, etc...  

    This is a lovely piece, but I would spank the brightness, perhaps via an exciter. 

    Of course, what I say may be Bravo Sierra... Always a possibility. Love the movement on the PAD ;-)

    You know, I turned the volume up a little and it was better. I would still consider either EQ or an exciter on that grand. Probably the later, but maybe with a touch of the former? Check out an Alloy demo... 

    http://www.izotope.com/products/audio/alloy/download.asp

    But you can do pretty much the same thing w/your Ozone. Alloy has some nice presets.
    post edited by The Band19 - 2012/09/07 22:38:03
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/07 22:35:32 (permalink)
    this is refreshing and sweet. very day-dreamish, like when you look up from your work out a window in a pleasant reverie, or in context with song title, looking out at a moon emerging up from the horizon on a warm summer night.

    the melody is delicate yet enforcing. i enjoyed the guitar layering solo as it complements the piano.

    i think this may be a bit too 'centered' in terms of the guitar and piano competing for aural space. you could stereo image the piano leaning towards one side or the other, then put the guitar on the other side w/ a bit of pan delay traveling though.

    a very enjoyable listen & charming composition.  nice :)
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/07 22:47:36 (permalink)
    Thanks Robby.  I'll try that.  Or at least one of those thats. :)

    Thank you, ABV.  I'm really glad you like it.  That's a good idea about the panning too.

    I'm going to try to do more mixing of this in X1 and see if it helps at all.  So far it's driving me batty, but I'll give it a few more minutes.  :)

    (do you really have to go to the Console view to get to the FX bin?  Please tell me I can do it the old, uncomplicated way!)  
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 00:50:59 (permalink)
    sound like a shadow of the moon. Nicely done!

     
     
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 06:37:16 (permalink)
    Sweet stuff, Janet!I love that riff too.

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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 10:30:37 (permalink)
    Thanks, Space.  :)

    Thank you, Scott! 
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 10:47:46 (permalink)
    Beautiful tune Janet.  I love the melody and the emotional quality of your playing.  Your part and Rikkie's fit together so well.  Daren (ABV) has some good advice on the panning, and in X1 it should be a snap.  The f/x bin in X1 can be accessed from either the track view or console view.  If you decide to EQ or add f/x to the piano, just clone the original track, mute it, and experiment with the copy to your heart's content.  That way you can A/B the two tracks quickly.  The dark piano sound that you use is a good sound to begin with, so don't let it drive you to distraction.  You already have the performance done.  Bravo.

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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 10:49:17 (permalink)
    Very pleasant I enjoyed the piano and the guitar. 

    The auto panned strings I found distracting, this could be me of course.  On my JV1080 most of the string voices have auto pan by note, meaning that every other note plays out of a different channel.  Fine when played with chords as it gives a dramatic spread but individually it irritates me.

    Other than that it was nicely done thanks to you both for sharing.


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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 11:45:27 (permalink)
    Very nice Janet.  I like the composition and melodies - very emotional.  The guitar blends beautifully with the piano.  The piano has a nice dark rich quality to it, and you performed it with a lot of passion. 

    A couple things came to mine - I was listening on my headphones, and the strings which are panning back and forth had a slightly dizzying effect - on speakers it would probably be just fine.   You know what you could do to get a sweeping effect on those strings without having to pan is the Sonitus Modulator - they've got a "sweeping" preset that's pretty cool.

    The other thing I thought of was a big cavernouse reverb tail!  Not loud reverb, but long reverb would sound cool and fit the song.  It sounds great with any reverb though - that is judgement call. 
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 12:01:57 (permalink)
    Loved it...The piano sounded PERFECT for the mood the guitar fit in perfectly aswell ( maybe even dull the guitar down a bit too, I`d put some more lows on it. However the panned STRINGS were very annoying bouncing back and forth felt very UNNATURAL to me and pulled my attention away from the beautiful piano.


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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 12:23:26 (permalink)
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    I'm going to try to do more mixing of this in X1 and see if it helps at all.  So far it's driving me batty, but I'll give it a few more minutes.  :)

    (do you really have to go to the Console view to get to the FX bin?  Please tell me I can do it the old, uncomplicated way!)  
    I know what you mean Janet... I've had X-1 for a year, but I'm still using 8.5...
    I just can't warm up to it...
    This is lovely music and a wonderful performance/production... Rik's guitar was icing on the cake... well done...
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 14:38:38 (permalink)
    Thank you Lynn.  I appreciate that!  :)  OK, so what's the trick for getting the FX bin to show up where it used to be...or even remotely close?  I've never had to look for it before.  I'll try some tricks with the piano too.  Thanks for the tips.  Actually, Rik already has...I'll try to listen to his version after I get more work done this afternoon.  :)  

    Thanks John.  I knew that panned synth wouldn't be everyone's favorite, but I wanted to give it a try.  We'll see what happens.  Thanks again.  :)
    Thanks very much, Geno.  Do you mean a cavernous reverb tail on the whole thing, or just the piano or synth?  I'll give your ideas a try too. Thanks again!  

    Thanks so much, Allan.  Yeah, the synth panning is indeed different.  I can't imagine what it would be like in a good room with good speakers.   Really glad you liked the piano.  I'll keep messing with the eq.  Actually, I never even thought about that part of the mix (surprise!)  lol.   Too many things to keep track of these days... :)  

    Thanks Frank!  Yeah, I imagine we're not the only two.  My goodness...that smart tool in staff view is the dumbest thing I've ever seen...and I don't exactly have the patience to find things that just used to BE there.  I wonder if there's a free manual out there that's way less than 300 pages?  Fortunately you can still make beautiful music Frank.  :)  Thanks again! 

    Thank you, Phil!  
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 17:12:21 (permalink)
    Real nice Janet and Rik. Got no crits cause I was just listenin. 

    Janet, why burden yourself with X1? I agree, not much of it works logically for me either. I use 8.53. Play around with X1 here and there trying to "get it"..

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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 20:04:22 (permalink)
    Thank you Lynn.  I appreciate that!  :)  OK, so what's the trick for getting the FX bin to show up where it used to be...or even remotely close?  I've never had to look for it before.  I'll try some tricks with the piano too.  Thanks for the tips.  Actually, Rik already has...I'll try to listen to his version after I get more work done this afternoon.  :)  

    Janet, there's an option of what you can put under your track headers in Track View.  To the left of the track headers should be the inspector pane, with tabs for clip,trk, and PC (if you have Producer).  Open the trk tab and at the bottom of the screen you should see a tab for display.  Here is where you can decide what to put in each track, including the f/x bin.  I hope this answers your problem.

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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 20:33:46 (permalink)
    Nice melody and playing....

    I think the piano is a bit too bottom heavy. I'd cut the lows a bit and boost the highs to give it some air..... that section at about 2 minutes would sound so sweet if it was a bit lighter. 

    Use Ozone on the piano track... there are some piano presets. Then use it on the master buss too.  Use only the modules you need to get a good sound.

    The guitar behind the piano was nice. 



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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 20:48:27 (permalink)
    Thank you, Tim.  :)  Yeah, I bought it for myself last Christmas and then hit a dry spell with music...and the few times I've tried to use it just end up getting frustrated.  I thought it would help me keep up with the big boys, but it won't until I can figure out the very basics.  (there might be a little more to keeping up with you big boys too.  lol)  

    Thank you, Lynn.  Can't wait to see if I can find that.  Since I never ever use the inspector pane, I didn't want to have to start now if I don't have to.  

    Thanks Herb.  Like I said, I just never thought of eq'ing that thing.  I should be able to figure out at least one way to do it.  
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 20:56:54 (permalink)
      Ahhhhh  Love the relaxed feeling this gives me.  Nice!!!


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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 21:02:39 (permalink)
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    Thanks Herb.  Like I said, I just never thought of eq'ing that thing.  I should be able to figure out at least one way to do it.  


    you should experiment with it..... EQ can really bring out the sparkle in those keys.

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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 21:05:29 (permalink)
    Hi Janet,

    This is a really lovely song. You and Rik are always a great combination.

    You've got plenty of suggestions from people far more knowledgeable than me so I'm just listening and enjoying!

    Very nice.

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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 21:36:57 (permalink)
    Janet - About the reverb - I'd put some on all the instruments, and the strings would have even more to push it back in the mix.  You'd want to play around with the EQ of the reverb so that it wouldn't have too much bottom end. 
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 21:54:39 (permalink)
    Very nice Janet.  I'm using 8.5 and I will never be able to use it to it's fullest.   Heck, I still couldn't  use 10% if Office 98  and now they got Office 2010.   That said, there are some nice EQ and compessors out there, the PSP plug ins  are very good and not expensive.  Do you use Ozone to master with?  I can't see anything in X that would compell me to go through the grief of upgrading, at least not for my simple needs.

    Nice song.

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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 21:54:48 (permalink)
    Thank you, Mike!  :)

    Herb, I hope this is more sparkly.

    Thank you, Gary.  I'm very glad Rik wanted to play along!

    Thanks Geno...I was just sitting here messing with that...so glad you popped in again.  I gave it a try...woops...didn't play around with the eq of the verb.  I'll look at that now.

    New mix up now.  Thanks again!  
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 21:56:43 (permalink)
    Thank you, Daryl.  Yeah, I know now that I'll never be able to use any software to its fullest.  Heck, I'm not even that hot of a composer or piano player.  :)  Yes, I use Ozone, and am still finding my way around it.  I wouldn't have upgraded if I knew then what I know now.  I've always been excited with the upgrades until now.  Anyway, thanks again!  
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 22:05:29 (permalink)
    Geno, the reverb has a low cut at 100.  I don't know if that's what you had in mind or not.  I can't hear the difference. 

    Thanks Lynn!  I couldn't see a tab at the bottom, but for some reason I remember reading where you can change the look of the track view (and other views) with the number keys.  (where did I read that?!)  Anyway, I started messing around with those, hit 2, and voila...everything's back.  Well, at least those things.  Thank you!  
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon 2012/09/08 22:06:32 (permalink)
    And thank you, Wookiee, for your help in that matter, too! 
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    Re:Shadow of the Moon, new mix 9/8 2012/09/08 23:47:58 (permalink)
    Janet,
    Well you already have enough mixing suggestions, so I just say I liked what you did.
    Glad your student let you finish it.
    I also liked what Rik brought to the song as well.

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    Re:Shadow of the Moon, new mix 9/8 2012/09/09 00:24:11 (permalink)
    Hi J., thanks for letting me play on this lovely tune.

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    Re:Shadow of the Moon, new mix 9/8 2012/09/09 01:25:09 (permalink)
    Hello Janet
    Long time no see/hear. Love the vibe of this piece. I'll leave all the mix suggestion to the others and just sit back and enjoy.  KUDOS!



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