Anyway, this race war on the fringes of society: go on, give me an example of it, a for instance. Something that supports the claim that there is a race war, and moreover that it is kicking at your door. I'm all ears, really.

I wont get into all the techno-harmonic stuff......your vox sounded like Roxy Music/Brian Ferry.....what is great in my book cuz I'm a huge Roxy fan....I'd like to see the idea developed more and I wasn't a fan of the ending..well at least in-light of the length of the vox before it....I would have liked to hear more vox..and more movement/layers to carry the tune beyond where it stopped (development-wise) I like weird stuff....so I liked this...just needed a bit more work IMHO Keep on rockin

Thanks for the positive comments guys, I'm out here for the evening.  I find it funny the compliment about the vocal triumph considering how I broke the rules but thanks.

Mr.t do you know the song I'm talking about in regards to Leonard Cohen it's called there is a war and it's off the album new skin for the old ceremony. Have a listen the you might understand the sentiment in the lyrics.

But hank you for all the comments good ban and indifferent.

Neb

John T


Anyway, this race war on the fringes of society: go on, give me an example of it, a for instance. Something that supports the claim that there is a race war, and moreover that it is kicking at your door. I'm all ears, really.

Helter Skelter?

ProjectM


Well, whatever. I thought this was pretty cool and had to have a second listen. I'm a fan of a lot of stuff you do Ben, this one stands out all on its own. Whatever people put into it, I enjoyed it as a piece of music

Hey  Marius, I know I have a few fans, so thanks for the encouragement.  I've got to check the mix and the master on my pissy speakers before I sign of on the mix. 
 
I know that this sort of stuff is not everybodies cup of tea but it is what is.  I come from the days of albums and this would be a killer track if it was sequenced right on an album.
 
You know when you put yourself out there people are always going to have a crack and as I said, I can handle the slings and arrows.
 
I've got three more killer tracks that are all so different from one another, ones just a pure acoustic number called BrickCloud, ones a house tune I composed with a house mate called Yellow Candy and the other is a knock at the world called Sausage Factory but I might not bother with the last tune because if they can't handle Space Monkey they probably can't handle The Sausage Factory.  LoL
 
Neb  

foxwolfen


Well, let me state that I actually really like this song. Has a bit of a hard rock blue peter sound to it. Very cool. I like the flow, the effect, sounds pretty tight.

Thanks Shad, it would seem my personality, which can only be described as a little overwhelming is overwhelming my contributions on the song forum.
 
I'm sorry I haven't been participating, in perhaps the best part of Cakes on-line community.  I have gone over my download limit, so I am enjoying the humble speed of dial up internet at the moment.
 
Best wishes Neb