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2012/05/21 02:31:43 (permalink)

Space Monkey

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Here is another from the vault but this is one of the lost gems: Space Monkey.  I was fooling around with Cakewalks now defunct Project 5, using their midi and audio loops.  This song came about from using one of the supplied bass midi loops and the a free 303 emaulator called Tau.  The drums and the songs name came from an audio loop, for some reason I couldn't get the loop to gel, so I programed an approximation and mixed up a few drum samples in the Velocity frum sampler.  The vocal was recorded at the time, using a behringer $90 pre-amp and an Audio Technica microphone. 
 
The vocal is a prime example of recording super hot.  When you listen to the song you will notice the vocal is a belter, so already it's going to be a loud signal, I have fed this into the Behringer tube pre-amp and to get decent 2nd harmonic distortion, I've turned it up loud, so loud we are clipping.  To combat this I have used the Creamware effect Soft Clip shaving off a millimeter so we don't get digital overs.  This is a new mix and has a new guitar solo at the end.
 
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 10:58:49 (permalink)
    Ben, you definitely have a unique mind and approach to music.  This sounds pretty good for a cheap preamp.  The vocal  sounds robust, and I hear no clipping at all.  The song itself is definitely         you.  I'd love to have a peek into that vault of yours.  I have a feeling it would resemble Pandora's box ;)  Thanks for the cool vibe.

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 12:52:29 (permalink)
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    The vocal is a prime example of recording super hot.  When you listen to the song you will notice the vocal is a belter, so already it's going to be a loud signal, I have fed this into the Behringer tube pre-amp and to get decent 2nd harmonic distortion, I've turned it up loud, so loud we are clipping.  To combat this I have used the Creamware effect Soft Clip shaving off a millimeter so we don't get digital overs.
     



    Sounds like a lot of trouble to go to to get that result Ben. Why not just record at a usable level, there are many ways to get a loud vocal without clipping.

    If there's '2nd harmonic distortion' present, I'll take your word for that, it's subtle enough that I can't hear it.

    I didn't care for the song, lyrics or guitar tone, but I suspect that's not the important thing for you about this post.

     
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 13:55:45 (permalink)
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 18:45:50 (permalink)
    I like this kind of stuff in small doses. A little bit of Neb goes a long way!

    I think you have moments where you sound like Jim Morrison. Keep it up Ben!


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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 18:55:21 (permalink)
    didn't care for this one... vocal melody sounds like its in a different key...
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 18:56:36 (permalink)
    Hey Lynn, I am slowy running out of useable material, if I hadn't lost a whole heap of stuff I'd probablly never need to write another tune.  On sayaing that this going through the vault is just my way of killing time until I get my new "live" rig up and running and then I'm going to experiment with different ways of putting songs together, using Sonar's idea of non-linear sequencing.

    I'm also going to branch out into more sound art, like at the end of the song, which is actually Malcom McDowell from the 1968 Lindsey Anderson film "If" (Great film for those who haven't seen it) the line is "One man can change the world with a bullit in the right place" the rest of the sound collage is my response to that I suppose.  I don't know if I agree with the notion but I do know change is needed, how we acheive change is the question and the whole song is about how we're in the final quarter and do you really want the truth.  Were down but not out, the confronting lyrics are "truths" on the fringes of socity this is what is happening.

    It's all well and good James and James not likeing the lyrics but maybe they don't know or care to know how fractured society is.  They don't want to know the score but this will come back and bite them in the bum someday.

    James 1213, perhaps then you can't hear whats going on but then again maybe you can, that track is riddled with different forms of harmonic distrotion real and simulated.  For instance the bass synth has the old Tape Sim FX, the vocal, actually is a good example of combining a cheap transistor microphone with an ultra cheap tube pre amp (they're 50 bucks now) and virtual saturation.  On top of this over the whole track is a light smattering of real tube by way of my TL Audio A2 which has a seperate knob that allows me to dial in 2nd level harmonic distortion.  I dial in just a light amount to the point where I can just hear it.  It beefs up everything, it's hard to explain but there is def tube harmonics going on.

    Why I said you might be able hear whats going on is you picked the guitar sound and I had so much trouble with this and this was because I didn't record the guitar super hot and I just used the DI on my MOTU interface and your right it lacks punch, I wish I still had that now 55 dollar pre-amp, it works superbly on amp sim guitar tones by beefing the guitar sound up, it helps the guitar sound cut through.

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 19:10:57 (permalink)
    Hey Frank, it's in the key of C but it has a few oddities and perhaps your not use to listening to the different modes, I'm not a hundred % sure but I think bits of it are in the phrygian mode (it's either phrygian or maybe dorian) , so what you are hearing is a tenor type voice, singing a C pentatonic scale with bits of the phrygian mode in there.  So very exotic and quite confronting to ears who may be use to more standard minor, major scales.

    You may be right, though, I would not discount it but my ears are pretty good these days but I have been known to allow slips in tuning through.  I am old school in this way, it's only in the days of auto-tune that everybody thinks we can sing like robots, we can't and not even the greatest singers can always hit the notes.  Although this is not an excuse.  Anyone hear what Frank is hearing??

    And Backwoods, I like how you have hidden yourself, so I can't call you by your real name but thanks I know I always have a few loyal fans/listeners.

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 19:24:09 (permalink)
    I'm holding out for Project6... For vox? You should use the same rule as everything else, try to hit "around" -12, you can compress it a little on the way in, but not too hard. Then you can use amp sims, and other tools to add distortion. The trick, and "I know it's a trick" is to get the style of vocals you have here without overpowering the input. It's a subtle dance between the singer, mic technique, and keeping it low on the way in to achieve that -12ish threshold.

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 19:30:35 (permalink)
    I didn't say I don't like the lyrics: I don't like any of it.

    More pretentious noodling...ideas started and then carelessly put aside.

    I think you going into sound art will help you make more interesting music, since you seem to have an allergy to writing a single simple song that follows just the most basic of rules.

    I said it before: your stuff, while at times interesting, simply feels unfinished.
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 19:33:52 (permalink)
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    I'm holding out for Project6... For vox? You should use the same rule as everything else, try to hit "around" -12, you can compress it a little on the way in, but not too hard. Then you can use amp sims, and other tools to add distortion. The trick, and "I know it's a trick" is to get the style of vocals you have here without overpowering the input. It's a subtle dance between the singer, mic technique, and keeping it low on the way in to achieve that -12ish threshold.

    Exactly when you have a powerful singer that can really belt out a tune how do you contain it, I choose not to and did it "my way" and it worked.  This is not to say that I am right or it's going to work for everyone but hey it worked and there is no distortion even though on the pic on my soundcloud page you can see that it is clearly at the max.  So I must be doing something right.
     
    As for Project 6, were you a fan?? I have Project 5 V2 on my machine because of all the proprietary synths.  Cakewalk is a bit like me sometimes, too many ideas.  I suppose what they have done is combine elements of Project 5 into Sonar X1 and we now have the best of both worlds but for those who don't have the proprietary synths it would be good to see Cake release them, as they did with the effects.
     
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 19:40:44 (permalink)
    Soundcloud maximises the vertical size of waveform graphics regardless of actual level. You can test this yourself by putting something that you know is quiet all the way through on there. 

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 19:44:02 (permalink)
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    Soundcloud maximises the vertical size of waveform graphics regardless of actual level. You can test this yourself by putting something that you know is quiet all the way through on there. 

    I'm not talking about the waveform on the soundcloud page John, I'm talking about the pic next to or the one that represents the song!!!
     
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 19:45:54 (permalink)
    Oh that. Well, it certainly shows you did something loud. "Right" is another question. 

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 19:59:46 (permalink)
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    Oh that. Well, it certainly shows you did something loud. "Right" is another question. 

    Well is there any distortion on the vocal??  I said it was my way and it may not be right but again this whole audio engineering business is subjective and maybe just maybe I have stumbled onto a third way!!!
     
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 20:14:30 (permalink)
    There was no distortion on the vocal because you "used the Creamware effect Soft Clip shaving off a millimeter so we don't get digital overs".  Not sure how millimeter relates to the db scale, though. Anyway, you did, as several people have told you is the accepted method, lower the signal before the A/D converter so there was no clipping. If you had not done this, THEN you would have an example of this "recording hot" method you espouse.

    So, what you are doing is attenuating the signal so you don't clip, and then claiming you're getting a beneficial result from hitting the converter hard... which you are NOT doing because you "used the Creamware effect Soft Clip shaving off a millimeter so we don't get digital overs".
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 20:35:43 (permalink)
    Don't fight city hall Ben... It may feel right sometimes? But in the end, well, it never ends well. People here who listen and comment (not me!), some of them? Some of them are really experts... Don't listen to everything everyone says? But when you hear some "who are clearly very good at the mix? (again, that's not me.)" starting to echo the same things? Then it's time to start waving that white flag "trust me."

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 20:41:25 (permalink)
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    There was no distortion on the vocal because you "used the Creamware effect Soft Clip shaving off a millimeter so we don't get digital overs".  Not sure how millimeter relates to the db scale, though. Anyway, you did, as several people have told you is the accepted method, lower the signal before the A/D converter so there was no clipping. If you had not done this, THEN you would have an example of this "recording hot" method you espouse.

    So, what you are doing is attenuating the signal so you don't clip, and then claiming you're getting a beneficial result from hitting the converter hard... which you are NOT doing because you "used the Creamware effect Soft Clip shaving off a millimeter so we don't get digital overs".

    Actually Mitt, if you read the my final post on the Softclip topic, you'd know that Matt and I figured out what I was saying was a bit jumbled and we worked out what I was actually saying.
     
    Go and take a look, Matt was able to put it more succinctly than me, I'm a mad proffessor, so I can jumble things a bit.
     
    What I was talking about was this idea and not clipping, got that I never said anything about clipping.  I did mention from the Paul Frindle thread that he thought there might be something called digital harmonic distortion but I don't know anything about this, whether it is true or not.
     
    Instead of trying to tear me down, think about what you are saying, I am talking about ideas and the disscusion of ideas.  You who want to tear me down over on the techniques forum because I am not talking about audio engineering 101, should really open your eyes and think about this notion of ideas and be more open to disscuss ideas.
     
    I know I come over full on, but to sit there in judgement of me because of my style is nothing short of discrimination.  The only two people I have had a go at are always pontificating, perhaps I pontificate, I don't know?? But I don't judge you or anyone else, I am not that kind of a man!!
     
    I sit on the outer and look in and all I see on this forum sometimes, is a schoolyard dynamic and so I fight that because I did when I was at school.  I don't want to hang out with the cool kids, I am not a nerd and I am not a merry prankstar but there is still a place in the world fo me because I am a man of ideas and all I was doing was sharing my ideas!!
     
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 20:51:34 (permalink)
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    Don't fight city hall Ben... It may feel right sometimes? But in the end, well, it never ends well. People here who listen and comment (not me!), some of them? Some of them are really experts... Don't listen to everything everyone says? But when you hear some "who are clearly very good at the mix? (again, that's not me.)" starting to echo the same things? Then it's time to start waving that white flag "trust me."

    Thats my job!! Ok whats your opinon on the mix and the master BOTR, nobody has commented on the mix or the master.
     
    I know that there are a few experts on this forum I as I said (on the softclip topic) am not an audio engineer, I am a music technologist, so there is a big difference.  A music technologist is someone who may have a basic grasp on audio engineering but mainly I have grasp on what is happening with the technology, past, present and future.
     
    So as I say, I come accross full on but I am introducing ideas from what I am reading and from my experiments, see that last word experiments.  I am an audio scientist or as I have put in the past, I am a scientific artist.  I know somewhat pretentious but hell artists are.
     
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/21 21:28:32 (permalink)
     
    My ears "mix wise" are not the pros, and your song is intense? It's niche'? I'm not saying it is bad, or good. It is different? And difference can be celebrated on its own. A lot of people are not different, that doesn't mean they are not good? or that they are.  I think your unique style is a welcome addition, and the forum would be diminished without it. The point I was, and am making is, I have put out more than my share of "mix turds..." And people have said, "NO! NO!! DON'T DO THAT!" And at first I was all like, but I'm an artist? And you just don't know how to appreciate me? And over time, I have learned that, yes, "I am an artist." Do I always know best? "Hell no..." I came to this realization over time, it was not easy, but I am all the way there now :-) I'm still an artist? I still have strong opinions? But if you let the experts help? You will gain much from it... So my point is more philosophical, but still right. Think about it.

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/22 03:46:54 (permalink)
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    It's all well and good James and James not likeing the lyrics but maybe they don't know or care to know how fractured society is.  They don't want to know the score but this will come back and bite them in the bum someday.

    It's not that I didn't understand the subject matter, I said I didn't care for the lyrics. There are ways of writing about such issues without being crass.

    Here's a good example of that; No, Surrender

     
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/22 05:47:55 (permalink)
    Chappel essentially has it. Mystery solved.

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/22 05:48:04 (permalink)
    Song is terrible, by the way.

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/22 07:07:14 (permalink)
    Thanks Mr.T (I pity the fool) for your subjective opinion, no mention of the mix and the master so I can only take that as approval even though you don't like song and as I say it's your subjective opinion. But thanks for the kudos on the mix.

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/22 07:30:00 (permalink)
    No, the mix is really quite poor.

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/22 07:33:14 (permalink)
    Since you're so focussed on the vocal sound: the vocals sound really dissociated from the rest of the track. The reverb on the vocal is too readily apparent, and rather than aiding cohesion, it ends up making the vocal sound quite separate from the rest of it. Backing in general sounds kind of thin and lacks punch. Guitar tone is actually not bad, I'll grant that.

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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/22 07:33:42 (permalink)
    Lyrics are ridiculous. Where exactly is this race war, kicking at your door, happening?

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    BenMMusTech
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/22 07:50:13 (permalink)
    This is how subjective your opinions are mr.t (I pity the fool) and how subjective the whole idea of good and bad is. You make mention of the reverb well actually it's many layers. There is reverb and pitch shifted delay on the left and right side one up one down.

    I make the claim about subjectivity because you like the guitar tone yet James 1213 says he hates it and I think it could be better.

    Nothing about vocal distortion even though clearly I have recorded super hot and if you play it in Sonar it does indeed go into the red this is before I use the trim to turn it down.

    As for the race war it's happening right now, the world is falling apart and on the fringes of society there indeed is a war, it's more a reference to a Leonard Cohen song and as we can see once again you have no historical or artistic perspective.  

    You really are a dunkorf mr.t (I pity the fool) the only reason you have any traction in these parts because lets face it before I came along you were derided. I'm now more hated than you, so you have moved up the food chain. No matter though I have more heart than you so I can handle the slings and arrows better than you.

    Neb 
    post edited by BenMMusTech - 2012/05/22 07:53:20

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    John T
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/22 07:56:20 (permalink)
    There is no distortion on the vocal, as others have already pointed out. That thing about meters in the red in Sonar can be misleading. Depending on this or that factor, you can have every track meter pinned to the red across many tracks and still have no distortion. I'd explain why this is, but you wouldn't listen, so what's the point?

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    BenMMusTech
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    Re:Space Monkey 2012/05/22 08:00:54 (permalink)
    jamesyoyo


    I didn't say I don't like the lyrics: I don't like any of it.

    More pretentious noodling...ideas started and then carelessly put aside.

    I think you going into sound art will help you make more interesting music, since you seem to have an allergy to writing a single simple song that follows just the most basic of rules.

    I said it before: your stuff, while at times interesting, simply feels unfinished.

    Ok fair enough!  Once again though these are just sketches and I'm trying to find a new way to make and compose songs. 


    What you think of as music and what I think of as music is purely subjective, if you take all the composite bits on my soundcloud page it's actually a painting and so this track is what it is and it needs no more or no less.


    If you look at my overall output you start to see a much more wholistic picture, I could say the same about the music you post, that is its a very cookie cutter style but I've been a lot more generous in my comments toward your production even though I find it predictable.


    As I say though it s just my opinion.
    post edited by BenMMusTech - 2012/05/22 08:06:23

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