man, this is great!  love this all through!  I can hear both of your styles in here!  love that bass line all throughout - very nice.  love that lead guitar, too.
 
great stuff!  no crits!

You guys should work together more often.  The lyrics are great!  I really like the way you change it up at 2:40.  Great guitar tone at 3:50 and the ending is sweet.
 
Jqs

This kind of has a Weird, I mean, feeling to the vibe on the sound. Some might call it a love sound, but it is however WEIRD! How should I take hearing this? 
 
Are you WEIRD!?  And if so, in what way? And no I am not saying Gay! 
 
It is however rather weird. While listening to this, should I hit the PANIC mode button on how to perceive the sound? 
Nah, I don't think so, although I do however think this is a classically influenced great work of art with sound. 
 
I hate it when people say : "I like your work!".  It's obvious Daryl, this is your passion when it comes to making music. No doubt this is a Beatles influenced style, and please don't take that as a bad compliment because I SURE WISH SOMEONE WOULD SAY THAT ABOUT ME AND MY SONGS!
 
I enjoyed hearing this one very much. Your vocals carry the melody in a special way that nobody else could, I don't know if you know this or what I am talking about. 
 
Okay, there ya go, this is my review of your song, I think it sounds great!!!!!! 
 
Bobby
 

Don't sell yourself short. I have a terrible tonality to my voice, so I don't sing lead, but I can sing a reasonably good harmony these days. I used to be way off key all the time, but it was due to my singing soft and timid. Once I learned to let it fly from the diaphragm, I found I could stay on key pretty well. That might work for you too.

Great Squeeze vibe with a bit of George Harrison/Jeff Lynne sauce thrown in, but it's got a thing all its own too. This is really great stuff, like it a lot.

A great pop song! Fantastic vocals and harmonies and I love the chord changes and breaks. The lyrics are great too. This reminds me of 10CC with the quality of vocals and the overall production. Great work!

Serious_Noize!
This kind of has a Weird, I mean, feeling to the vibe on the sound. Some might call it a love sound, but it is however WEIRD! How should I take hearing this? 
 
Are you WEIRD!?  And if so, in what way? And no I am not saying Gay! 
 
It is however rather weird. While listening to this, should I hit the PANIC mode button on how to perceive the sound? 
Nah, I don't think so, although I do however think this is a classically influenced great work of art with sound. 
 
I hate it when people say : "I like your work!".  It's obvious Daryl, this is your passion when it comes to making music. No doubt this is a Beatles influenced style, and please don't take that as a bad compliment because I SURE WISH SOMEONE WOULD SAY THAT ABOUT ME AND MY SONGS!
 
I enjoyed hearing this one very much. Your vocals carry the melody in a special way that nobody else could, I don't know if you know this or what I am talking about. 
 
Okay, there ya go, this is my review of your song, I think it sounds great!!!!!! 
 
Bobby
 

thanks a lot Bobby - I really appreciate it

kevinwal
Great Squeeze vibe with a bit of George Harrison/Jeff Lynne sauce thrown in, but it's got a thing all its own too. This is really great stuff, like it a lot.

Thanks a ton mate

kevinwal
A great pop song! Fantastic vocals and harmonies and I love the chord changes and breaks. The lyrics are great too. This reminds me of 10CC with the quality of vocals and the overall production. Great work!

Thanks a lot Kevin - very kind of you

bapu
Listened again. Good on you for not including any banality on this one.

Thanks mate.
It was banalicious but Lynn's brilliance squeezed it out of the song.

daryl1968

bapu
Listened again. Good on you for not including any banality on this one.

Thanks mate.
It was banalicious but Lynn's brilliance squeezed it out of the song.

Daryl's being too modest.  His lyrics steal the show!