Great song. The drummer is workin' OT on that kick man. ;)

ABSOLUTELY AWESOME CHARLIE ROY! I wouldn't change a damn thing.

Only listening on lappy, so can't always tell, but this mix sounds pretty good and certainly translates well. I don't mix this type of music, but when I do have the odd heavyish guitar part I usually struggle not to have it either overpowering everything or just getting buried, but you've not done that, so you're certainly doing something right.  You might want to check your file 'cos it ends kind of abruptly and doesn't sound as if it's meant to. Not read any of the other comments yet, so sorry if I'm just saying what has already been said.