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Re:would appreciate some constructive criticism 2011/03/10 09:16:44 (permalink)
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Oh phooey.  That means I'll either have to learn to use Sonar better or continue my voice lessons.  lol

or both 

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Re:would appreciate some constructive criticism 2011/03/10 12:00:34 (permalink)
Nice tune, Randy.  I liked the harmonies.  Your voice sounds good. 

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Re:would appreciate some constructive criticism 2011/03/10 12:12:32 (permalink)
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Nice tune, Randy.  I liked the harmonies.  Your voice sounds good. 

Thanks Warren, I didn't want to admit this but I guess I should since there have been comments on my voice...one of the things I was saying to Janet (anyone can sound okay using Sonar) meant that I raised the pitch on my vox 1/2 step...which I think makes anyone sound tighter/smoother (Todd Rundgren did this a lot). I wanted to use V-Vocal which may have been better than CW pitch shifter (could have fixed some of the intonation issues too) but the dang thing kept crashing on me ...come on X1b!
Thanks very much for the compliment though...you should try it some time.

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Re:would appreciate some constructive criticism 2011/03/10 12:16:54 (permalink)
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Nice tune, Randy.  I liked the harmonies.  Your voice sounds good. 

Thanks Warren, I didn't want to admit this but I guess I should since there have been comments on my voice...one of the things I was saying to Janet (anyone can sound okay using Sonar) meant that I raised the pitch on my vox 1/2 step...which I think makes anyone sound tighter/smoother (Todd Rundgren did this a lot). I wanted to use V-Vocal which may have been better than CW pitch shifter (could have fixed some of the intonation issues too) but the dang thing kept crashing on me ...come on X1b!
Thanks very much for the compliment though...you should try it some time.


ah.  that explains it.  I knew the vox didn't sound quite right but couldn't put my finger on why.

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Re:would appreciate some constructive criticism 2011/03/10 12:51:10 (permalink)
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Nice tune, Randy.  I liked the harmonies.  Your voice sounds good. 

Thanks Warren, I didn't want to admit this but I guess I should since there have been comments on my voice...one of the things I was saying to Janet (anyone can sound okay using Sonar) meant that I raised the pitch on my vox 1/2 step...which I think makes anyone sound tighter/smoother (Todd Rundgren did this a lot). I wanted to use V-Vocal which may have been better than CW pitch shifter (could have fixed some of the intonation issues too) but the dang thing kept crashing on me ...come on X1b!
Thanks very much for the compliment though...you should try it some time.


ah.  that explains it.  I knew the vox didn't sound quite right but couldn't put my finger on why.
well they may not sound quite right but they sound better than the original vox (you'll just have to take my word on this cause I ain't posting the original : )


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Re:would appreciate some constructive criticism 2011/03/10 19:47:00 (permalink)

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Re:would appreciate some constructive criticism 2011/03/11 14:33:02 (permalink)
cool tune...need to fix those drums laddy!...and maybe put a lil veb on the backing vox...

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Re:would appreciate some constructive criticism 2011/03/12 09:01:22 (permalink)
I've shelved this one until I get my son to sing it but what is "veb"?

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Re:would appreciate some constructive criticism 2011/03/13 04:34:11 (permalink)
ok, that is really a strange intro.. when I first heard that I've double checked if no other songs were playing in the background.. that's pretty bad, this means that mix is really wrong. Anyway, the song was surprisingly ok.. so, I guess, you just replace that intro with something else and all will be well.


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