evadianepug
We'll never come up with that "thing" that everyone wants to hear.  You stepped away from anything I've heard you do in the past and that is ballsy AND it sounds good.  Just different, but, isn't that what you were looking to do? That is a Nashville USA Custom Tele.  It is fun to play.  I was a Gibson only guy for most of my life and now I don't even have one.  Fender and Spector plus acoustics hang in my room now.  I'm about ready to add a Gibson, though.  I can't wait to hear your next tune.

Hi Warren , 
I'm busy working on my next tune and I haven t been around much
it's gonna be pretty much all guitar synth ,  have I learned my lesson about playing and composing stuff people want to hear ? gulp…..No 
I guess we will see what happens when I post it ….. 
 
I'm gonna have to try out a Tele w a middle pick up ..that Nashville USA Custom you have sure looks nice ...
thanks ….
 

alkie
Had a listen and I get what robbie is saying. It feels like a bunch of ideas put together but they are not cohesive a few of the stops it felt like I just changed the channel. On the other hand the guitars had some Great tones to them throughout which kept me listening to the end. I don`t know how to be constructive as I`m not a songwriter but If I were you I would look at turning this into about six different songs. 

hi alkie, 
sure , I can accept where you are coming from and I appreciate your honesty.
thank you for sharing that .
 
Kenny